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    Post by 84 January 16th 2012, 7:20 pm

    July 26th 2012 Edit: Forget everything that was here, we're starting fresh. Snuggles (That Zez guy) and I have briefly discussed the first story and villains, but we have yet to agree on a design for Community Man.


    What I need from you:
    At this time, all I'm really looking for is suggestions on Community Man's design. You may reply to this topic with your ideas using text or drawings.

    So that's about it, hopefully I'll be able to update this topic with more info shortly.





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    Post by Moran January 22nd 2012, 10:23 am

    Sign me up and stick me wherever I'll fit.
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    Post by Zez January 22nd 2012, 1:29 pm

    I'll sign up for all of it and see which ones I fail at and we can go from there.
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    Post by Techimo January 23rd 2012, 4:06 pm

    I will be the basic plotter.
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    Post by 84 January 29th 2012, 11:47 pm

    Added a "temporary" jobs section for people who are unsure of what they would be best at. Zez and Mly have both been added to this section.

    Tech Hushimo wrote:I will be the basic plotter.
    A basic plotter. Tech has been added as a basic plotter.

    Also, I have finished the first conceptual artwork of "Community Man".

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    Post by Moran February 2nd 2012, 12:29 pm

    The proportions don't seem right to me. That is, he's too short and stocky. If you're going by superhero standards, he should probably be somewhere between a head (at least) and a small but very noticeable amount taller than almost anyone in-'verse, being the main protagonist, and rather elf-like save for possibly ridiculously defined features, most notably the "upside-down triangle" upper torso. The mask also looks odd, like a wrestling mask instead of a superhero mask, really. That combined with his physique makes him look like a wrestler in general rather than just a basic superhero.

    That's about all I could nitpick about it as a concept art. If that's what you think we should go for, it's definitely a possibility. I'm not too sure on it, though.
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    Post by 84 February 2nd 2012, 3:51 pm

    Mly wrote:The proportions don't seem right to me. That is, he's too short and stocky. If you're going by superhero standards, he should probably be somewhere between a head (at least) and a small but very noticeable amount taller than almost anyone in-'verse
    Well, to be honest I didn't think too much about proportions since it's the first artwork. Also, we're not dealing with Superman or Wonder Woman, that is to say Community Man is a normal man, his height for the most part would be average to show he's an average man.

    Mly wrote:The mask also looks odd, like a wrestling mask instead of a superhero mask, really. That combined with his physique makes him look like a wrestler in general rather than just a basic superhero.
    That is exactly what I feared. I've been working on a new mask that doesn't look like a wrestling mask but have been having some trouble. So, is there anything particular you would like to see in a new mask?

    Anyways, I'm going to hold on to this design, we could always use it as his "first costume", before he had the resources to make a better one.
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    Post by Zezima July 27th 2012, 10:00 pm

    Character concepts:

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    Prologue draft:

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    Post by sykog July 27th 2012, 10:11 pm

    Wait, is Community Man supposed to be more serious, or a joke?
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    Post by 84 July 27th 2012, 10:27 pm

    It's supposed to be a retelling of TSC's history in a comic book format, take that as you will.
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    Post by sykog July 27th 2012, 10:32 pm

    Ah, so a comedy. He needs a new mask, and a rounder head. And the S in his logo should be bigger than the T and C, not smaller.
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    Post by 84 July 27th 2012, 10:38 pm

    That is an outdated design, read Zezima's post for the recent developments.
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    Post by sykog July 27th 2012, 11:15 pm

    But I like yours better.
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    Post by TrueBlue52 July 28th 2012, 12:34 am

    I think the designs on his shorts make him look like he wet his pants!!

    If you redraw him, try working on shading a little bit. If you have artist pencils (the numbered ones from soft/dark to hard/light) use those. Blending stump. But not the kind you peel off layers. Get the other kind that looks like an eraser (its not an eraser)

    Basically what i'm trying to say is use dark thin outlines on the clothes. That way, it will look more like stitching.
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    Post by 84 July 28th 2012, 3:08 am

    As I have already said, it's an outdated design that was quickly drawn as a concept. I would like to stress that all art in this topic is conceptual and in no way representative of the final product. Nevertheless, thank you for the input.


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