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    Post by Twixie Hushimo April 15th 2010, 7:45 pm

    Jane, Jane, the irritable pain, waits all day to play their foolish game.
    They sing and they chant from night until dawn
    Before they know it the nights have grown long
    Jane, Jane, the irritable pain,
    Wonders if she has gone merely insane.
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    Post by Shade April 16th 2010, 9:57 am

    Ashley Hushimo wrote:Jane, Jane, the irritable pain, waits all day to play their foolish game.
    They sing and they chant from night until dawn
    Before they know it the nights have grown long
    Jane, Jane, the irritable pain,
    Wonders if she has gone merely insane.

    That's wonderful poetry, Ash.
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    Post by T@ilz April 17th 2010, 9:27 pm

    Usually, I'd think poems are gay, depressing, and emo. But this is a pretty good poem, Ash. Great work! laugh

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