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    Post by Schismatist February 17th 2011, 1:37 am

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    I'm not going to lie, I'm far from a great artist, and this picture is to show, I drew this in about five minutes as soon as Sonic Colors' second trailer. I was hoping that someone who is more knowledgeable when it comes to art could give me some advice on how to improve my work.
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    Post by NeoMetalSonic February 17th 2011, 10:50 am

    Sonic's body is way too long and his ears need to be bigger
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    Post by Schismatist February 17th 2011, 5:23 pm

    NeoMetalSonic wrote:Sonic's body is way too long and his ears need to be bigger
    Well like I said, I drew this thing in about, 5 minutes, so it certainly is probably the worst example possible.
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    Post by Eileanach February 19th 2011, 3:46 pm

    My only suggestion would be not to make your lines so pointed like his arm folds look jagged like you drew a stick man and just fleshed it out. If you are drawing a stick man using him as a "cage" and draw on either side of it to make it more "fluid" and less pointed.

    You are certainly not terrible I think your art looks quite good. Got a lot of potential.
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    Post by Schismatist February 19th 2011, 6:24 pm

    Eileanach wrote:My only suggestion would be not to make your lines so pointed like his arm folds look jagged like you drew a stick man and just fleshed it out. If you are drawing a stick man using him as a "cage" and draw on either side of it to make it more "fluid" and less pointed.

    You are certainly not terrible I think your art looks quite good. Got a lot of potential.
    Thanks, that helps a lot, I'll try to draw something more "organic looking" soon.
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    Post by Twixie Hushimo March 30th 2011, 3:32 pm

    It's quite good, but I agree that it's a bit too straight and long, and a bit disfigured. For a five minute drawing, though, it's quite impressive!

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