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    Post by The Blue Blur April 7th 2011, 8:17 am

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    Post by The Freedom Fighter April 8th 2011, 1:50 am

    Just to give some helpful advice, there is a lot you can do to improve your work. Try to be more organized. Random humor can be great, but you're being a little too random to follow things. Even TTGL doesn't break logic until later in the series.

    My suggestion to you is to have an idea of where you want the story to go, use white backgrounds for the text, and just try to make it look like a real comic or sprite comic would.