A poem... by me

I don't know if this belongs here, but here goes nothing!

You watch a bird through the window
The bird tweets and stares at you
It looks at you with curios eyes then flies away

Birds fly from their problems, what about us
We all need a salvation, we all need to fly away

All our words spoken
were all once thoughts
and thoughts are all free

wasted moments dwelling on the past, when you here a clash at the window
it's the tiny bird waking you back into reality

I came up with this free verse when I saw a bird this morning, it inspired me. What do you think? :>_>:

That I should rip off a bird wings and put it on my back?

I will think about which forum this topic belongs to. Nice poem, though.

TalkingObject wrote:That I should rip off a bird wings and put it on my back?

i don't know what to say about that, but ok! And thanks Zezima, I wasn't too sure about putting it here. :Confusion:

Belongs in the "All About You" section. Moved.

Thanks Zezima!

Shadow The Ultimate wrote:Thanks Zezima!

No problem, Shadow. Also, your poem is pretty deep, and I like that. Short, but to the point and deep. Well done.

Rating: :Cool!:

Yea, I plan on doing more poems like this soon. I have used a lot of memory on my computer saving these types of poems for no reason. Well, now I have a reason!

Shadow The Ultimate wrote:Yea, I plan on doing more poems like this soon. I have used a lot of memory on my computer saving these types of poems for no reason. Well, now I have a reason!

Glad top hear it. Do you have any more to post?

It's alright, but it doesn't chain together well.

Nice poem, but does anyone think we need a poem thread? Hmmm... that gives me an idea.

codeorange wrote:Nice poem, but does anyone think we need a poem thread? Hmmm... that gives me an idea.

No, hardly anyone makes any poems around here. I guess some more people might if there was a poem board, but it's still doubtful, and these things can just go in the fanfiction section anyways.