I thought i'd do a background story of Kiyel, of course, if I do that, it really becomes a background story of 4 characters. The other three are Kane, Ein, and Hensa. I hope you enjoy.
Chapter One:Losing One Wasn't Enough
Rain clouds. Dark, gray, and sad. They glide over a town while they release rain drops which can sadden any cheerful heart. it rains at a steady pace, making everything wet, cold, and dark. A drop from the all the rain lands on a coffin top. It starts to slide down the coffin in a slow steady pace. it slides off falls onto soft soil that someone dug. A priest speaks words to a crowd dressed in black. Most of the crowd were foxes and hedgehogs all dresses in black. Most of the females had tears in their eyes, as well as some children. Kiyel can be seen staring at the coffin. He wasn't sad or upset. he just has a emotionless face on, staring at the coffin. A picture of his dad smiling was set on a table with flowers around it. "I'm sorry kid. But we can't find your fathers body. All we found were his work cloths and a sample of his blood." Kiyel remembers the officer telling him. Kiyel watches as the coffin descends into the grave and his mother weeps on his shoulder. He holds her and starts to walk her back to their house.
Two days have passed since he watched his fathers coffin be put into the ground. Kiyel walks to the window and looks up at the dark and gray clouds. It been like this for a while, but no rain, thunder, or lighting. He looks below and sees his mother cleaning off the table in there back yard. His eye catches something dark and black, but it was a blur. He wiped the window to check his vision. The dark black blur was still there, only a few feet away from his mother. he opens the window to double check his vision. As he did so, it began to move towards his mother slowly and haunting. he leans forward quickly trying to make out what it was but couldn't. it started to move faster towards his mother and his heart began to race.
"Mother!" he calls to her. She looked up and instantly saw the dark black blur drawing near her. She squinted her eyes but it still looked blurry. She slowly starts to step back as it started to pick up more speed, going into a full walk instead of taking it step by step. Her heart starts to beat hard and fast as she gets a cold chill down her back. Her mouth slightly opens in shock as she continues to back away from the table. Suddenly the dark black blur leaps towards the table and the table explodes while splitting in half. She screams out of fear and falls backwards, looking at the dark black blur. She tries to quickly crawl away but slips from the wet dirt and grass. She starts to breathe heavy and fast as it walks to her in a ghostly manner.
"MOTHER!!!" Kiyel shouts as he grabs the gutter next to the window and slides down it. The gutter gives way to his weight and snaps, making him fall to the soft wet grass with a thump. He grabs his chest in slight pain from the fall but quickly rolls over and looks towards his mother. She screams as a four clawed dark black hand is seen, ready to strike and kill Kiyels mother.
"NOO!!!" Kiyel shouts stretching out his hand towards her as she lays there wide eyed, shaking and in shock. Suddenly, the dark black blur flings backwards as if being hit y a strong force. it slides back but is now visible. It it as about the same size as a normal human. its eyes are are red and diagonal with a face the shape of a the front of a jet. The back of its head has spikes pointing out in all directions but in a circle around its head. Kiyel is stunned at this beast like creature.
It jumps back on to its three clawed feet and starts to fight the air it would seem, but each time it blocked, a sound of clashing metal would be heard. Kiyel keeps on watching and suddenly catches a glimpse of a sword attacking the creature. He then spots three swords at once attacking the creature. Confused and in shock he stays motionless, trying to figure out whats going on. The creature lashes out a back slash and suddenly the side of his house gets impact by something and creates a whole on the side of his house. Something dashed out of the whole through the smoke and he could barely see someone zoom out of there through the smoke.
The creature lashes out twice and something hit the ground hard and made an whole in the ground while something else crashes into a table and benches they had in their back yard. The creature slashes down but is stopped by something. That something starts to be seen as a sword. this floating sword was blocking the creature from slashing the wielder. The struggle hold as intense, as the creature could not move or do anything else. What ever was wielding that sword must have great strength.
"Kane!! Use It!!" A voice shouts which seemed to come from the smashed up bench and table.
"RAAHHHHH!!!!" Another voice shouts as a gust of wind bursts out of the sword blocking the creatures attack. Kiyel covers his eyes with his arm from th dirt that was kicked up then looks back at the fight. His eyes open wide as he sees a black hedgehog wearing a kimono and flowing with gold spirit energy. The hedgehog was grinning evilly at the creature as he began to make the creature slide backwards on its feet.
"Kane?" Kiyel whispers remembering what the voice shouted.
Kane lashes out his sword and launched the creature back with force, sending it crashing into a brick wall they had in there backyard. Kane grins more as he walks towards where the creature had crashed. suddenly, a creature with blue eyes lunges from that very location and screeches as it attacked Kane. Kane slashes it with one quick stoke and makes it explode into black dust. Then, a hedgehog hybrid appears next to Kane also wearing a kimono. The hybrid joins them also wearing a kimono.
Suddenly Kiyels mother screams in fear. Kiyel looks to her and sees the first creature that attacked picking her up my her shirt. It thrust its claws into her stomach and out her back. She gasps in pain while also wide eyed from shock. The creature drops her roughly onto the ground as a black dark liquid begins to flow into her as blood starts to pour out. The creature slash opens a portal type black hole then grabs Kiyels mother. The trio dash for the creature but it jumps into the portal and slashes it shut. Kiyel remains wide eyed in shock laying on the ground, disbelieving what he just saw. The trio dashes off the other way and leave him alone, seeming like they didn't care for him nor were they there to protect him of his mother.
Kiyel keeps looking towards where his mother was, hoping she would return, and all of this was just a bad dream. he watches intensely, but nothing happens. tears begin to flow out if his eyes and down his face as he remains in shock. He now was alone. Scared, afraid, angry, upset, in pain, and alone. What is he to do now, with out his father or mother, what can he do. what can he do?
Chapter One:Losing One Wasn't Enough
Rain clouds. Dark, gray, and sad. They glide over a town while they release rain drops which can sadden any cheerful heart. it rains at a steady pace, making everything wet, cold, and dark. A drop from the all the rain lands on a coffin top. It starts to slide down the coffin in a slow steady pace. it slides off falls onto soft soil that someone dug. A priest speaks words to a crowd dressed in black. Most of the crowd were foxes and hedgehogs all dresses in black. Most of the females had tears in their eyes, as well as some children. Kiyel can be seen staring at the coffin. He wasn't sad or upset. he just has a emotionless face on, staring at the coffin. A picture of his dad smiling was set on a table with flowers around it. "I'm sorry kid. But we can't find your fathers body. All we found were his work cloths and a sample of his blood." Kiyel remembers the officer telling him. Kiyel watches as the coffin descends into the grave and his mother weeps on his shoulder. He holds her and starts to walk her back to their house.
Two days have passed since he watched his fathers coffin be put into the ground. Kiyel walks to the window and looks up at the dark and gray clouds. It been like this for a while, but no rain, thunder, or lighting. He looks below and sees his mother cleaning off the table in there back yard. His eye catches something dark and black, but it was a blur. He wiped the window to check his vision. The dark black blur was still there, only a few feet away from his mother. he opens the window to double check his vision. As he did so, it began to move towards his mother slowly and haunting. he leans forward quickly trying to make out what it was but couldn't. it started to move faster towards his mother and his heart began to race.
"Mother!" he calls to her. She looked up and instantly saw the dark black blur drawing near her. She squinted her eyes but it still looked blurry. She slowly starts to step back as it started to pick up more speed, going into a full walk instead of taking it step by step. Her heart starts to beat hard and fast as she gets a cold chill down her back. Her mouth slightly opens in shock as she continues to back away from the table. Suddenly the dark black blur leaps towards the table and the table explodes while splitting in half. She screams out of fear and falls backwards, looking at the dark black blur. She tries to quickly crawl away but slips from the wet dirt and grass. She starts to breathe heavy and fast as it walks to her in a ghostly manner.
"MOTHER!!!" Kiyel shouts as he grabs the gutter next to the window and slides down it. The gutter gives way to his weight and snaps, making him fall to the soft wet grass with a thump. He grabs his chest in slight pain from the fall but quickly rolls over and looks towards his mother. She screams as a four clawed dark black hand is seen, ready to strike and kill Kiyels mother.
"NOO!!!" Kiyel shouts stretching out his hand towards her as she lays there wide eyed, shaking and in shock. Suddenly, the dark black blur flings backwards as if being hit y a strong force. it slides back but is now visible. It it as about the same size as a normal human. its eyes are are red and diagonal with a face the shape of a the front of a jet. The back of its head has spikes pointing out in all directions but in a circle around its head. Kiyel is stunned at this beast like creature.
It jumps back on to its three clawed feet and starts to fight the air it would seem, but each time it blocked, a sound of clashing metal would be heard. Kiyel keeps on watching and suddenly catches a glimpse of a sword attacking the creature. He then spots three swords at once attacking the creature. Confused and in shock he stays motionless, trying to figure out whats going on. The creature lashes out a back slash and suddenly the side of his house gets impact by something and creates a whole on the side of his house. Something dashed out of the whole through the smoke and he could barely see someone zoom out of there through the smoke.
The creature lashes out twice and something hit the ground hard and made an whole in the ground while something else crashes into a table and benches they had in their back yard. The creature slashes down but is stopped by something. That something starts to be seen as a sword. this floating sword was blocking the creature from slashing the wielder. The struggle hold as intense, as the creature could not move or do anything else. What ever was wielding that sword must have great strength.
"Kane!! Use It!!" A voice shouts which seemed to come from the smashed up bench and table.
"RAAHHHHH!!!!" Another voice shouts as a gust of wind bursts out of the sword blocking the creatures attack. Kiyel covers his eyes with his arm from th dirt that was kicked up then looks back at the fight. His eyes open wide as he sees a black hedgehog wearing a kimono and flowing with gold spirit energy. The hedgehog was grinning evilly at the creature as he began to make the creature slide backwards on its feet.
"Kane?" Kiyel whispers remembering what the voice shouted.
Kane lashes out his sword and launched the creature back with force, sending it crashing into a brick wall they had in there backyard. Kane grins more as he walks towards where the creature had crashed. suddenly, a creature with blue eyes lunges from that very location and screeches as it attacked Kane. Kane slashes it with one quick stoke and makes it explode into black dust. Then, a hedgehog hybrid appears next to Kane also wearing a kimono. The hybrid joins them also wearing a kimono.
Suddenly Kiyels mother screams in fear. Kiyel looks to her and sees the first creature that attacked picking her up my her shirt. It thrust its claws into her stomach and out her back. She gasps in pain while also wide eyed from shock. The creature drops her roughly onto the ground as a black dark liquid begins to flow into her as blood starts to pour out. The creature slash opens a portal type black hole then grabs Kiyels mother. The trio dash for the creature but it jumps into the portal and slashes it shut. Kiyel remains wide eyed in shock laying on the ground, disbelieving what he just saw. The trio dashes off the other way and leave him alone, seeming like they didn't care for him nor were they there to protect him of his mother.
Kiyel keeps looking towards where his mother was, hoping she would return, and all of this was just a bad dream. he watches intensely, but nothing happens. tears begin to flow out if his eyes and down his face as he remains in shock. He now was alone. Scared, afraid, angry, upset, in pain, and alone. What is he to do now, with out his father or mother, what can he do. what can he do?
