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    Post by The Prodigious Ult Zerda July 11th 2010, 12:04 am

    Ah, sweet sweet haven from the world I call Poetry. A sanctuary for my creativity. Considered "base" of my characters. Here is where I will post all my poetry. I am indeed a poet, so I do have more than 50 poems, so rather make a bunch of topics, rather bunch them in one.

    " Very, very interesting. " ~ Metaphoric Rain.
    " Really good writing. " ~Arobia
    " Beautiful. Truly glorious! You have the heart of a writer! A poet! Congratulations! I have not read such a good poem for some time! Thank you! " ~Jokers_Kitten
    " You use very wonderful words here that help paint a picture
    I enjoy your writing, well done "
    ~soulxXxeaterxXxmaka.

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    All Hail my American People!

    Well I think I would get out the door
    And open my eyes to a world
    That had no one guessing before...

    Tonight I promised myself I would cry
    After the day I lie
    But frankly now I just want to die

    The sickening and thickening of my generation had nonstop
    Of all ears grant to people of sex and sucking the "blowpop"
    Oh how I wish life was easier to deal with to not be on top

    Whom sings whom laughs who seizes the days
    MOVE OUT OF OUT MY WAY
    We're breaking through as I say

    America! America! Give freedom to thee!
    Break me free!
    I want to be myself; and myself only to please me!

    I'm alone

    The world's out to get me

    A poet

    An incognito Poet

    Save. Us.

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    Post by Shade July 11th 2010, 1:57 pm

    Good work, dude. Good work indeed. You should be proud.
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    Post by The Prodigious Ult Zerda July 11th 2010, 2:15 pm

    Thank you!

    Perfect, the Key of Death

    Intellectual, Powerful,
    Words that describe a man so fluently
    For they are usual sorrowful
    As man travels the world correctly... occasionally.

    As devil haunts, as God sings
    The children of those are left unanswered
    Awaiting for someone to fly with blacken wings
    To grant them wishes, becomes a necromancer

    To speak with the loved ones they forgot
    Haunting them in dreams and nightmares
    Men created, men wrought
    Destroyed by men and rebirth from flares

    Death can not hold those with purpose
    Which is why we are still on this planet
    But if windows as dustier as those
    Petulant people, all I need to do is write and sit

    As the world engulfs in their own madness.

    =End=
    Comments: Not much of any project really, just a random one.
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    Post by Shade July 11th 2010, 4:46 pm

    The second part is even better than the first part, if you don't mind my saying so.

    Good work indeed, and congratulations on your induction into the Writers' Group.
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    Post by The Prodigious Ult Zerda July 11th 2010, 5:24 pm

    Aw... Thank you!

    Sitting near the Ocean in New Jersey

    Well back then I knew someone very fair
    Soft skin large eyes ripe hair
    She was one of a kind yet hardly there just the same
    There was no possible way to allow a tame
    It was raining in our sanctum covers
    Aftermaths huddled with unknown lovers
    She could talk- we learned to speak in one year
    As it went by there were no more tears
    It was a long rode to peace
    Yet all we did was cease
    We had everything lovers had
    We blew it and I'm not sad.

    Well I'm Mad.
    And I'm Bad.

    And years later gone by
    There was no time to die
    As the fire glowed in epic light
    Our friend had a baby- unique sight
    She stayed with us at our place
    Well we broke through the window at a pace
    We knocked on the door
    But the phone would not answer- the curtains- tore
    As her father passed over and her sister is a star
    Her mother drinks eternally at a bar
    But she remembered New Jersey- the musicians and poets
    Grasped by the ocean and the people whom laughed in the silhouettes
    She lived down int he valley
    As I worked out on the farm rally
    We climbed up the mountains and everything's fine
    And I'm still here, alive, and you're still there, poor, mine..
    We're still around...
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    Post by Shade July 19th 2010, 1:47 pm

    We're still not found..
    But the tide has turned,
    And I have learned,
    Not to reveal your game,
    Lest others do the same.
    and to caress the mane
    or your Giant Great Dane,
    just to keep you sane.

    I hope you don't mind that I continue your poetry..

    Great work, by the way.
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    Post by The Prodigious Ult Zerda July 20th 2010, 8:37 am

    Tis' fine. owo. I stopped after " We're still around... " to leave somewhat a cliff hanger. But interesting expansion. Owo.

    Love Dreams

    I opened the door to a new world and had a wide smile
    I was psyched out for such a while
    It was strange like calculus and never again would I feel this
    I grew sad over time so I had the rest...

    Don't know what came and don't know what I saw
    But I believed it was shadow figures all so tall
    It was magnificent;
    Yet I felt very insignificant

    I looked into my eyes through the mirror and saw a garden rotting
    To my vision and knowledge my death was trotting
    The times of love will never end
    Dreams are dreams this is a love dream again

    Never again would I feel this emotion of such ecstasy, my notion was to enjoy it
    But I had to ignore it for my own beneficial desires and values I fit
    This was not like any ordinary feeling for I am dull
    A man a poet a human a soul...

    I entered the moon's delirium and laid in the chasm it had there
    I enjoyed being alone at to that point- gazing at the stars- uncared
    The times of love will never end
    Dreams are dreams this is a love dream again

    Even now love seems to be fading in our own derision there are still few who believe so
    Myself towards my love who I dearly so adore her name brings my happiness off to go
    To my generation who cares only of lust sex and sodomy rapes I tell you something
    That love can exist wherever you go, no matter how lost you get in your spasm-springs

    And this is another love dream again
    This isn't the end
    HAHAHA.

    Enter my love dream I know you want too
    There will always be an escape for poets and artist for anyone and you
    Enter again in my black but beautiful heart and kiss whom you love on the lips
    For another day will never end, love is love, dreams are dreams- there are my tips.
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    Post by Shade July 20th 2010, 2:05 pm

    Again, that was absolutely astounding work. Well done on your latest poem.
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    Post by The Prodigious Ult Zerda July 20th 2010, 3:45 pm

    Thankis. ^w^

    When the World Stops Poem Epic.

    When the world stops
    When the maiden mops
    When the balloon pops
    When the world stops
    We're at the center drop

    Turn out your life
    Turn out their light
    Turn out the sight
    Turn out his might

    Yeaaa-yeaaahh..

    The day the musics over
    The day the drunk is sober
    The day the last of the clover
    In the wretched city of Dover

    See the last of the streets
    See the last time we meet
    See the last time we seat
    See the last time cheat

    For when the world is stopped for eternity
    Without power or serenity
    The world will never stop it's tranquility
    But will continue it's rapid war in antiquity

    I want to hear
    And be here

    To hear the scream of the faceless faces
    Just a bunch of empty spaces

    We're getting tired of hanging around
    Waiting around with our heads against the ground
    We heard a very gentle sound

    Underneath the solid rock
    Underneath our shoes and socks

    What have they done to the earth?

    What have they done to our beliefs?

    Why did they tie her in fences
    Dragged her all usurps

    Shhhhhhhhhhh..

    ....







    ....







    Tell them we don't need a prescription to hide
    From the cities of artist hidden inside

    When the world is over
    When the drunks are all so sober
    And begin drinking all around over

    Save us!
    Save us from our world!
    Save us!
    Save us!

    When the world has stopped with sudden breaks
    A trivial advertisement to swim in their lakes
    Bunch of music- bunch of fakes
    Children equal foods and cakes

    Lies shoved down their throats
    Letting it flow in their mind like boats
    Distracted to know the true hoax
    Until the end we can not float

    When the world has stopped
    When the drunks have dropped
    When the fish had flopped
    When the maidens mopped

    There will never be an end

    Never be a perfect end
    This horrid trend
    Prepare to submit and send
    A love letter to your neighbors friend

    " I'm looking to reach your hand and hold it
    I want you to see the wonders of your mind a bit.

    You were EATEN by the LIFE you had now its time to try.
    Return it back before you die. "

    I want you back in my arms
    Warm and cared, there, are no alarms

    Come today beside me
    I want you to look and see, the
    Prisoners for we
    The cold gritter and bitter smells like pee

    We were lied to everyone

    We want the truth and we want it now

    For when the world is stopped for eternity
    Without power or serenity
    The world will never stop it's tranquility
    But will continue it's rapid war in antiquity

    Tell them we don't need a prescription to hide
    From the cities of artist hidden inside

    We are the ones who carry souls
    Taking one after one eating them whole

    When the world stops to a close
    Save us from this incident suppose, we can
    See a glimmer of light and then we rose
    Into a new world, we pose.
    =End=

    Comments: I do like this one. It is the a very unique poem that I did try my best. Took about 62minutes to write and 32minutes to type it all. Average is usually 41minutes to write and 17 minutes to type. So it is a very unique one, very very long than others. But enjoy. It has a lot of unique messages
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    Post by Shade July 22nd 2010, 2:52 pm

    Your work gets better and better, I swear it does.
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    Post by The Prodigious Ult Zerda July 23rd 2010, 9:58 am

    Thanks. ^^

    The Prodigious Sanctum Poem Epic
    Rated 4.92/5 and Considered most Favoured.

    I'm going to tell you a story
    About two young teenagers
    Frolicking in the smoke-filled gardens
    That even crack dealers would stay away.
    Every night around six
    The two would light up a campfire
    And smoke away their troubles
    Their troubles weren't really established
    Though it was proven they were having trouble
    Like everyone else a part of this world
    Whether it's money or deaths
    But the two teenagers carried on
    Not worrying about school or family
    And sustain smoking without care
    Their I.Qs slowly decreasing as dawn approached
    It had been twelve hours since their last smoke
    After fifty months they were found dead
    Drugs thrust in their eyeballs
    It was concluded to be an accident.

    So I ask my friends
    " Have you seen the accident at the garden? "
    And everyone else just looked at each other
    Asking " Did you see it? "
    I told them the story of the two teenagers
    Both lesbians who took a ride
    Away from their troubles
    They didn't want to die in an open field
    Or an automobile
    Poisons or toxins
    It was a damn shame they didn't see the accident
    I wrote down the brief story
    I titled it pretty simple yet understandable
    " Ode to the Druggies "
    And everyone laughed around my age number
    Except my teachers who scolded me
    About the title of it that it is against the rules
    Well how was I suppose to know 'druggies' is bad?

    I went home with a referral
    Stating the nonsense that committed
    I showed it to my mother and she laughed
    So childish that she even called the school
    To create more problems but I rather say nothing.

    Weekend came
    I went to the pawn shop
    I ask the pawn vendor
    " Hey Mr. Elder-man. "
    And he responded back to me
    But I stared at him
    With my eyes oozing crystal substances
    " I wanna Kill you. "
    I blurted and the vendor said
    " Well go a head I have nothing to live for "
    So I shot him in the eyeball
    The bullet was lodged in his brain
    He was stupid for a second
    Soiled himself down his beige pants
    I laughed inhumanly
    My teeth shaking in spasm movements
    My snot turning from gold green to blood red
    And my fingers growing persistently
    After that day I never looked in anyone's eyes again
    I thought it was my end

    I felt lustful and free
    I desired a place to hide
    Hearing about a sanctum over the Mexican border
    Crossing there would be my only escape
    So I marched down south first to Atlanta
    Then marched west to Houston
    Straight down to San Antonio
    And crossed the border not looking back
    I spotted the hiding place I sought
    The prodigious Sanctum
    Rims as gold as a snake's eyes
    Large enough to fill many immigrants from Americans
    Walking in there I sat with arms folded
    Awaiting my death
    However it took much longer than I thought
    I was then in such a trance that I was in an island
    With two girls smoking marajuana
    The girls involve with the accident from before.

    For seven years I spent my life on that island
    Playing the strange games with the women on that island
    They told me never trot north but I did
    I saw the ancient temple of Exile
    And looked around the halls of paintings
    I then awoke from my slumber
    Only to find I was merely disporting myself
    So I walked out the Sanctuary that was prodigious
    And I saw billions of people looking at me
    Waiting for an answer
    I stood up with a strange staff to my left hand
    I looked at them all and I said
    " For many years I had hide away from you all
    Just like today's society hiding the artist
    I prove to you that there are still artist out there
    Whether poetry or drawn
    So I ask of you fellow originals
    Who here wants to carry out the tradition of creativity
    If you responded yes then follow me
    Cause we are heading to the town of my birth
    And we will repel the insolence with our pencils
    Our minds vast as the story of God
    We will unleash such terrible vengeance
    That the very story of our courageous efforts
    Will be much more vast than the original Bible of Christianity! "
    =End=

    Comments: Not sure how to explain this but this IS a poem. It's basically a progressing story of a poet that wandered far beyond expectations. It's strange so try to understand it. Not sure if it is good or not nor am I expecting it to be good. Enjoy

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