by TheLordsbeacon May 10th 2011, 2:48 pm
Hi Ashley
I found this story entertaining to read. There were some themes that stuck out, for me anyways. Sonic always seemed to have a big brother like character to him didn't he? This character trait of Sonic seems to be universally understood. I think the brotherly part of Sonic came out first in Sonic 2 when Tails was introduced. The implication in that game was that Tails was a kid and Sonic was like a big brother to him. I have always liked that about Sonic. Anyways, about you're story...It is fun to read, but I have a few questions myself. I can tell that Ash has been transformed by Eggman somehow, but why did she go back to him? Was she going back to Eggman to be changed back to her normal hedgehog self? Also, why would she not be related to Sonic anymore? Would like to see an end to this story. Hope to see it someday :D
Sincerely
TheLordsbeacon