Fan Characters

I completely revamped my characters, so here are the new bios for my main ones:

Full Name: Ashley Cortson
Nicknames: Ash
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Species: Hedgehog/human
Strengths: Clever, adventurous, funny
Weakness: Too close to her brother, moody, a bit gullible at times.
Description: Sky silver with short, layered hair and sky silver eyes. She wears a purple tank top and purple jean shorts.
Human form description: Short layered blonde hair and sky silver eyes.
Powers: Can bend sound.
Family: Caiden is her twin brother.
Crush: Will
Bios/Story: She and her brother were returning from watching a soccer game with their parents when they were three years old when their car crashed into that of a chemist. Their parents died, and chemicals from the car of the chemist seeped into their cuts. Combined with the medicine given to them at the hospital, it gave them powers and the ability to turn into a hedgehog and back at will. Unable to control it at first, they were unwanted and they fled to the streets, using their powers to earn them money as stunt artists. Sonic and the gang found them and took them in.
Theme song: Breakaway by Kelly Clarkson

Full Name: Caiden Cortson
Age: 11
Gender: Male
Species: Hedgehog/human
Strengths: Smart, optimistic, athletic
Weaknesses: Stays guilty for things for long periods of time (and usually for things that weren't his fault), too close to his sister, gets embarrassed easily.
Description: Sky silver with flat hair that spikes horizontally in the back. Sky silver eyes.
Human form description: Ear length blonde hair that goes down to his neck in the back; sky silver eyes; wears a gray t-shirt and medium blue jeans
Powers: Can bend light
Family: Ash is his twin sister
Crush: Alison (bio not posted)
Bio/story: same as Ash
Theme song: We’ll Be Alright by Travie McCoy

Full Name: William Sandest
Nickname: Will
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Species: Hedgehog/human
Strengths: Brave, funny, charming
Weaknesses: Tires out easily, has a hard time finding words sometimes; is pessimistic sometimes
Description: A black hedgehog with blue eyes and short hair that spikes at the ends.
Human form description: Short black hair and blue eyes. He wears a black t-shirt and jeans.
Powers: Can turn into a human form and bend fire
Family: he has a sister named Amber
Crush: Ash
Bio/story: he grew up on a farm, but prefers the city. When his parents retired, he and his sister moved into the city. There he met Sonic and the gang, and then he met Ash and Caiden.
Theme song: Good Life by OneRepublic

woah you're back! Awesome

Yep, I'm back! It's good to see everyone!

Ashley Hushimo wrote:Yep, I'm back! It's good to see everyone!

Welcome back!

And nice fan character, by the way!

Full name: Terra Bellator

Species: Echidna

Gender: Male

Height: 3 feet 8 inches tall

Weight: 105 pounds

Sexual Orentation: straight

Marital status: single

IQ: 130

Age: 18

Known relatives: Quake (father) and Gaia (mother.) Both are deceased and were formidable geomancers

DOB: 6-17-92

Birthplace: Downtown Station Square

Residence: Somwhere deep in the moantains.

Occupation: None

Social Class: Loner

Alignment: Neutral

Top speed: 60 mph (on foot) 150 (using Geo transportation, see below.)

Appearance: Typical echidna look (muzzle shape, tail, body shpe) with brown fur. A tuff of green hair is on his chest. His hands have five fingers rather than the boxing-glove shaped ones. Small spikes come out of the knuckles on his pinky and index finger. He has green markings on his hands (similar to those of Silver the hedgehog) with matching ones on the tops and bottoms of his feet. These markings are the key to his Geokinesis

Dreadlock style: Four brown dreadlocks on each side of his head, six on the back and four on the front, two on each side that covers the corners of his eyes. The bottom half of the quills are also a darker shade of brown and seem to be made out of rock itself. The dreadlocks on the front of his head go down to about shoulder height, the ones on the side reach down to chest level and the back ones go down to waist level.

Eye color: Green

Skin color: Tan muzzle

Attire: He has no gloves or shoes, a loose-fitting tan open vest and baggy dark brown jeans that have his tail poking out the back.

Abilities - Geokinesis. Terra Bellator is able to manipulate earth and rock, in all its various forms. His Geokinesisis isn't his only asset. He usually combines his power with his vast knowledge of martial arts matched with his acrobatic proficiency and his super strength. Terra also has massive amounts of endurance and has to undergo a lot of damage to go down for the count.

Basic rock movement - He can hurl large boulders at enemies or bombard them with hundreds or thousands of smaller ones.

Tremor - By slamming a fist or a foot on the ground he creates small tremors that stun any enemies within a ten yard radius.

Earth smash: Terra can easily destroy rocks and boulders with punches and kicks.

Earth sinking: He can forcibly sink his opponents into the ground, imprisoning them or even suffocating them in earth.

Geo transportation: Being somewhat sluggish on his feet Terra can create a wave of earth that he rides on to use as a form of transportation.

Earth Tunneling: He can move through the earth to out-maneuver his foes either by opening tunnels or by pulling the earth past them, literally swimming through the ground.

Geo luanch: While Terra likes being rooted to the ground he can quickly move rock beneath him and launch himself several tens of feet into the air, whether to catch airborne opponents or to travel faster.

Earth compression: It is possible for Terra to compress large chunks of rock into smaller, denser chunks, or to compress several smaller chunks into one big piece of rock.

Geo wall - Creating a wall slightly taller than himself he can protect himself against projectiles, although a very powerful projectile or many weaker ones will go right through the wall.

Geo Line: As an offensive attack, Terra can create a line of twisted columns and propel it forward.

Geo Armour - Terra covers his whole body or even just an arm or a leg with the earth around him, always leaving only his eyes uncovered, strengthening both his offense and defense until it wears down. With the aforementioned "geo armour" he focuses on manipulating the earth he wears, making him move slower or faster depending on what he covers himself in.

Remote Geomancing: If Terra is suspended from the ground, but is aware that there is earth somewhere near, he can focus his energies and manipulate that earth out of his physical reach out of sheer concentration.

Geo Boost: A form where Terra unleashes his inner potential. A green aura surrounds him, he gains a slight muscular increase, his dreadlocks seem to float and his Geokinesis is greatly increased for an alotted time. This is a rare form and he doesn't even have control of when he undegoes it.

The following are attacks unlocked in Geo Boost.

Greater rock movement: With his greater power and stronger connection to the earth, Terra can move hill-sized statues at will.

Powered Compression: This much more powerful version of the Earth Compression technique. Instead of manipulating large chunks of earth into a single projectile, Terra can gather boulder-sized rocks and simultaneously compress each fragment into smaller, denser and harder rocks, essentially keeping the rocks under pressure for more volatile attacks if needed. Lastly, the rocks are directed to orbit around him until they are put to use.

Compressed Rock Bullets: One of his preffered attacks using the Powered Compression tecnique. Terra Bellator disintegrates all the compressed rocks orbiting around him and shoots iit in shrapnel like fragments with great speed, in a machine gun-like fashion.

Geo Blast: Covering his body with the earth around him or using the rocks from the Powered Compresion, he uses the remainder of Geo Boost in addition to a majority of power beyond that to unleash it in all directions. However after this attack his power is completely drained and is only used as a last resort.

Weaknesses: Terra is extremely hydrophobic and the water also hinders his abilities. His geo powers are also useless while in the air. Another weakness of his is a tendency to overexert himself. Unless he finishes an enemy quickly before doing so leaves him vulnerable.

Personality: Terra is stern and unmoveable like the element he controls and can also sometimes seems emotionless and non-caring, but the fact he wouldn't hesitate to lend a helping hand contridicts this. Just like the earth he is rooted to his duty. He is proud, persistent and enduring and also has trust issues from a result of his troubled past. As a reslut of his seclusion, he is very paranoid and will act on anything that moves. Despite this, in the face of danger he remains somber and vigilant and goes about his action cautously. All in all Terra is laid-back and down-to-earth and once this echidna trusts someone he will show that person unbeliveable kindness.

Background: Terra Bellator lived a normal life of a happy kid. This was until the age of six when he unleashed his dormant geomancing capabilities. His mother and father then made a mutual agreement to train their son, his father even teaching his vast knowledge of martial arts. They soon found their son was powerful, far exceeding their expectations. By the age of nine he surpassed his own parents. Things were going great for him until at the age of twelve while the family was asleep deep in the night Terra awoke to his father telling him these group of assassins came to collect the bounty that was placed on them. He also told him they captured his mother and was attempting to use her as bait to lure him into a trap. A noise went off, his father demanded that he get as far away as he can. Terra fled with many unanswered questions, worried and terrified for his parents but knew this would be best for him. He ran and ran until he found himself alone deep in the mountain side. He thought the worst for his parents but they raised him strong and knew if anything bad happened they did it for him. Even if they did sacrifice themselves it would not be in vain. Terra survived by making shelter out of the earth around him, using his Geokinesis to hunt for food and even found bodies of water to drink from. Four years has passed since he has seen his parents or any sighns of civilization. Terra Bellator has gone under self-training in hopes of avenging his fallen parents who he knew well enough were either dead or being held hostage.

SSS3, you're back!

Anyway, change on my characters and their powers:

Tides is now named Caiden, and he controls/uses electricity.

Hey, Ashley! :-O It's bee too long. How are things?

Alright, I guess. Things are kind of suckish right now, though.

Suckish huh? Unfortanate, I must agree things are suckish with me as well.

Full Name: Avery the Cat
Nicknames: Midnight. She does not like to be called by her true name.
Age: 17
Strengths: Good at hand in hand combat has good power and decent speed.
Weakness: She's a bit reckless and has low defence.
Description: grey with white markings, shorrthaired cat. Vegetarian. Loves to fight.
Bios/Story: Raised to be a bounty hunter, but found out about what Twilight (a villian) did to her hometown, then she rebelled against him.
Status: Taken (Freeze the Hedgehog)
Family: Leo (brother) Violet (twin sister) Eclipse (adopted son) ? (grandfather)

MidnightTC wrote:Full Name: Avery the Cat
Nicknames: Midnight. She does not like to be called by her true name.
Age: 17
Strengths: Good at hand in hand combat has good power and decent speed.
Weakness: She's a bit reckless and has low defence.
Description: grey with white markings, shorrthaired cat. Vegetarian. Loves to fight.
Bios/Story: Raised to be a bounty hunter, but found out about what Twilight (a villian) did to her hometown, then she rebelled against him.
Status: Taken (Freeze the Hedgehog)
Family: Leo (brother) Violet (twin sister) Eclipse (adopted son) ? (grandfather)

She seems interesting, but you didn't say too much about her. It looks like you've got a good character developing there!

Ok, here's more: Midnight is kind of mean and a bit of a jerk, but she's really nice if you get to know her. Midnight is a former assassin, and still loves to fight. She comes from a small desert village and her parents are dead. She was then kidnapped, raised to be an assassin, reached 3rd in command, found out the truth and rebelled... here is a picture of her.
Theme song: Pocket Full of Sunshine
Friends:Shadow the Hedgehog, Fifi the Cat, E-123-Omega
Rivals:Shadow the Hedgehog, Chase the Kangaroo, Rose the Hedgehog, Mix the Cyborg, Mari the Robot, Dr.Eggman, Sonic the Hedgehog
Enemies: Twilight the Hedgefox, Zone the Cat, Amy Rose, Big the Cat, Sparks the Cat, Lucas the Cyborg, Cinderblock the Cow, etc. (Yes, I have a fan character named Cinderblock... XD)

I like reading a lot about peoples' characters.

She seems cool! Nice job!

(I did some work on this character and I figured I'd repost it.)

Full name: Terra Bellator

Species: Echidna

Gender: Male

Height: 3 feet 8 inches tall

Weight: 105 pounds

Sexual orientation: Heterosexual

Marital status: Single

IQ: 130

Age: 18

Dominate hand: Ambidextrous

Known relatives: Quake (Father, current age is 38) and Gaia (Mother, current age is 33.) Both were part of a mighty geomancing clan. Once Terra was born they departed the clan with their consent in hopes their son would live a normal life.

DOB: 6-17-92

Birthplace: Downtown Station Square

Residence: Somewhere deep in the mountains.

Occupation: None

Social Class: Loner

Alignment: Neutral-good

Top speed: 35 mph (on foot) 160 (using Geo transportation, see below.)

Appearance: Typical echidna look (muzzle shape, tail, body shape) with brown fur. A tuft of green hair is on his chest. His hands have five fingers rather than the boxing-glove shaped ones. Small spikes come out of the knuckles on his pinkie and index finger. He has green markings on his hands (similar to those of Silver the hedgehog) with matching ones on the tops and bottoms of his feet. These markings are the key to his Geokinesis, glowing a bright green whenever he uses his powers.

Dreadlock style: Four brown dreadlocks on each side of his head, six on the back and four on the front, two on each side that covers the corners of his eyes. The bottom half of the quills are also a darker shade of brown and seem to be made out of rock itself. The dreadlocks on the front of his head go down to about shoulder height, the ones on the side reach down to chest level and the back ones go down to waist level.

Eye color: Green

Skin color: Tan muzzle

Attire: He has no gloves or shoes, a loose-fitting tan open vest and baggy dark brown jeans that have his tail poking out the back.

Abilities - Geokinesis. Terra is able to manipulate earth and rock, in all its various forms. His Geokinesisis isn't his only asset. He usually combines his power with his vast knowledge of martial arts matched with his acrobatic proficiency and his slight super strength. Terra also has massive amounts of endurance and has to undergo a lot of damage to go down for the count.

Basic rock movement - He can hurl large boulders at enemies or bombard them with hundreds or thousands of smaller ones.

Tremor - By slamming a fist or a foot on the ground he creates small tremors that stun any enemies within a ten yard radius.

Earth smash: Terra can easily destroy rocks and boulders with punches and kicks.

Earth sinking: He can forcibly sink his opponents into the ground, imprisoning them or even suffocating them in earth.

Geo transportation: Being somewhat sluggish on his feet Terra can create a wave of earth that he rides on to use as a form of transportation.

Earth Tunneling: He can move through the earth to out-maneuver his foes either by opening tunnels or by pulling the earth past them, literally swimming through the ground.

Geo launch: While Terra likes being rooted to the ground he can quickly move rock beneath him and launch himself several tens of feet into the air, whether to catch airborne opponents or to travel faster.

Earth compression: It is possible for Terra to compress large chunks of rock into smaller, denser chunks, or to compress several smaller chunks into one big piece of rock.

Geo wall - Creating a wall slightly taller than himself he can protect himself against projectiles, although a very powerful projectile or many weaker ones will go right through the wall.

Dust Cloud: By shaking the ground back and forth, Terra can create dust clouds of various size to provide cover.

Geo Line: As an offensive attack, Terra can create a line of twisted columns and propel it forward.

Geo Armor - Terra takes the earth around him and molds it to fit his body and create something similar to armor, increasing his offence and defence in turn for is mobility until it wears off.

Remote Geomancing: If Terra is suspended from the ground, but is aware that there is earth somewhere near, he can focus his energies and manipulate that earth out of his physical reach out of sheer concentration.

Geo Boost: A form where Terra unleashes his inner potential. A green aura surrounds him, he gains a slight muscular increase, his dreadlocks seem to float and his Geokinesis is greatly increased for an allotted time. This is a rare form and he doesn't even have control of when he undergoes it.

The following are attacks unlocked in Geo Boost.

Greater rock movement: With his greater power and stronger connection to the earth, Terra can move hill-sized statues at will.

Powered Compression: This much more powerful version of the Earth Compression technique. Instead of manipulating large chunks of earth into a single projectile, Terra can gather boulder-sized rocks and simultaneously compress each fragment into smaller, denser and harder rocks, essentially keeping the rocks under pressure for more volatile attacks if needed. Lastly, the rocks are directed to orbit around him until they are put to use.

Compressed Rock Bullets: One of his preferred attacks using the Powered Compression technique. Terra Bellator disintegrates all the compressed rocks orbiting around him and shoots it in shrapnel like fragments with great speed, in a machine gun-like fashion.

Geo Blast: Covering his body with the earth around him or using the rocks from the Powered Compression, he uses the remainder of Geo Boost in addition to a majority of power beyond that to unleash it in all directions. However after this attack his power is completely drained and is only used as a last resort.

Power source: As mentioned above, the markings on his hands and feet are the key to controlling his power. His connection to the earth is his main source. His lack of gloves and shoes strengthens this as well.

Combat style: While in combat Terra acts very decisive, always listening and waiting for the proper time to strike. In other words, he generally endures his enemies' attacks until the right opportunity to counterattack reveals itself, then strike with unyielding force. He utilizes heavily rooted stances and strong kicks and punches that evoke the mass and power of earth. He maintains a distinct balance between offensive and defensive capabilities to overwhelm opponents.

Weaknesses: Terra is extremely hydrophobic and the water also hinders his powers. His reliance on his lower body effects him as well. Removing him any substantial distance from the earth, such as in the air, strips him of his geo powers. If a direct strike were to occur on the center of his hand and feet marking, his geokinesis would be disabled for a short period of time. Another weakness of his is a tendency to overexert himself. Unless he finishes an enemy quickly before doing so leaves him vulnerable.

Personality: Terra is stern and unmovable like the element he controls and can also sometimes seems emotionless and non-caring, but the fact he wouldn't hesitate to lend a helping hand contradicts this. Just like the earth he is rooted to his duty. He is proud, persistent and enduring and also has trust issues from a result of his troubled past. As a result of his seclusion, he is very paranoid and will act on anything that moves. Despite this, in the face of danger he remains somber and vigilant and goes about his action cautiously. All in all Terra is laid-back and down-to-earth and once this echidna trusts someone he will show that person unbelievable kindness.

Background: Terra Bellator lived a normal life of a happy kid. This was until the age of six when he unleashed his dormant geomancing capabilities. This phenomenom occured during a frivilous game of tag with his father in the backyard of their house. As the young echidna reached an arm out to tag him he fell flat on his face. His father accompinied his son who had tears and dirt in his face. The tears soon vanished and his body began shakig. His mother appraoched Quake worried about her son. Quake, remembering a similar event that happened to him when he was young, sheilded him and Gaia in a dome of rock seconds before Terra let out a scream followed by bright light that consumed the place. Terra found himself on an island in the middle of a massive crater, petrified by his own feat. Quake and Gaia realized their son has unlocked his hidden power. They then made a mutual agreement to train their son, his father even teaching his vast knowledge of martial arts, keeping their history of the geomancing clan they were formerly a part of in the dark. They soon found their son was powerful, far exceeding their expectations. By the age of nine he surpassed his own parents. Things were going great for him until at the age of twelve while the family was asleep deep in the night Terra awoke to his father telling him these group of assassins came to collect the bounty that was placed on them. He also told him they captured his mother and was attempting to use her as bait to lure him into a trap. A noise went off, his father demanded that he get as far away as he can. Terra fled with many unanswered questions, worried and terrified for his parents but knew this would be best for him. He ran and ran until he found himself alone deep in the mountain side. He thought the worst for his parents but they raised him strong and knew if anything bad happened they did it for him. Even if they did sacrifice themselves it would not be in vain. Terra survived by making shelter out of the earth around him, using his Geokinesis to hunt for food and even found bodies of water to drink from. Four years has passed since he has seen his parents or any signs of civilization. Terra Bellator has gone under self-training in hopes of avenging his fallen parents who he knew well enough were either dead or being held hostage.

Name:Melody
Age:13
Birthday: April 12
Gender: Female
Species:Fox
Looks:Usually a red jacket,blue jeans, red shoes.She has light blue eyes,along with brown hair and bangs.She has gloves just like Amy's,and a tail like Tail's.She has tiny ears,and a cute necklace with a gold heart in the middle.
Fur Color:Light Brown
Weapon:If she needs to,she gets out her Piko Piko Hammer.Espicically when she's mad.
Personality: Nice,talented,patient,honest,adventourous,cheerful.
Family: Her mother and father,but they disappeared when she was 2 years old.
Friends:None,since she moved.
Best Friends:Also none.
Crush: Nobody
Enemy’s: Eggman,the person/people who took her mother and father.
Goals:To find the kidnapper and defeat him/her,and to live happily.
Super Forms:Twilight(Mysteriosly,her Piko Piko Hammer vanishes and it turns to a black and red ball that's floating.When she throws it,it turns bigger and more powerful.Her clothes turn in to a a Dark minight-colr dress,along with boots.Her eyes are completly red.This usually happens when she is possessed.)Holy Form(Basically the opposite of twilight form.She is a pretty angel and can fly;just like the Twilight form.She wears a pretty white dree,and instead of a ball or hammer,she has a rod with a star at the front tip of it.Her eyes are clear white,but good enough to see.)
Pictures:
Theme Song:Victoria Justice''Freak the Freak Out''
Story:Melody the Fox is in search of her parents and a place to live.She came from far away,and she's been loooking since she was eight.She's the carefree type,and she's not afraid to do anything.She just loves singing,and for some reason,the song's tell her something.So she follows her heart and goes to where it leads and starts singing again.She sometimes sings sad songs,and the world sometimes get's gloomy.
Powers:To control the elements.(Water,fire,air,earth,etc...)
Abilities:Singing leads to where she needs to go.

Full Name:* Coco the Fox
Nicknames: None
Age:* 17
Strengths: Average
Weakness: Not really any...
Description: (Color, size, etc..)* A brown fox with white hair, and orange eyes.
As seen in: (You can list the fan-fics this character has been in) I Still Love You
Facts: She can be very hotheaded and easy to offend, and she kicks major butt. :P
Bios/Story:* She goes to a high school, and meets this other fox named Kitchu. (Name I made up... X]) She and Kitchu become friends, and eventually start dating... :B And there's a stone that Coco finds that evidently goes into some statue hidden in a lost world. There's more to the story than that, but it's past 1:00 AM, so I'm too lazy to type more. XP
Picture:
Theme song: [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7_QydNXI_ok&feature=channel_video_title[/url[/url]

Full Name: Hayley The Bunny
Nicknames: Haley the Assassin, Hay
Age: 18
Strengths: Average
Weakness: nothing i can think of
Description: (Color, size, etc..)* A blue bunny with pink hair and red eyes
As seen in: Nothing
Facts: she can be very immature and kinda a party like person,
Bios/Story: Hayley had abusive parents as a kid, her brothers always hated her, Hayley has always been alone, she always acts happy though,

Heres how she looks

Name: Ezra
Nickname: The Ez
Age: 12
Strengths: Chaos Powers
Weakness: No Idea
Description: Human with Blue hair and a cloak with clothes like Goku's but reverse colors and Chaos Power'.
As seen in: Nada- Zip- 0
Facts: Easygoing and is bored by having no real challenge.
Bios/Story: The True Ultimate Life Form, he exceeds Shadow in power, but does not have the power of the black arms. Shadow's Brother in creation, he, like Shadow, was thought to be dead, but was reawakened by the power of Super Shadow, Super Sonic, and Super Silver defeating Solaris.

Seems like a good character, but I have a few tips for you:

Make some weaknesses. Otherwise, your character takes control of everything.

Try to make him as different from Shadow as you can. Nobody likes a character that's "canon character but with orange hair".

Thank's for the tip's. Okay I'll make a new one.
Name: Ezra
Nickname: The Ez
Age: 12
Species: Human
Strengths: None really...
Weakness: Everything...
Description: I like the blue hair and Cloak, but I'll make it t-shirt and sweat pants.
Fact's: Timid and scared because of weakness but is supported by Sonic and CO.
Bios: During Shadow the Hedgehog, Shadow accidentally hit a kid with a Chaos Blast[I don't know .] But when the smoke cleared, that kid was alive and standing up! Strange right?
Confused, Shadow just left. A few crooks cornered Ezra a few day's later, and threatened to kill him if he didn't give them all of his Yugioh cards[Cheesy, but hey, they could be huge Yugioh fans] he had at the orphanage. Sonic was running around, looking for Shadow when he heard a scream for help. Rushing, he found the location, but was shocked . He found three men on the ground unconscious[don't know how to spell that] and a beat up boy with blue hair. Then the boy fainted. Sonic rushed to the hospital, worried. When the boy woke, everyone was relieve Sonic. When Sonic asked what happened, the boy said that when he screamed for help, a red aura appeared, and the next thing he new, they were unconscious. Bewildered Tails scanned him, and found that he had a good amount of Chaos energy. Shocked, Shadow said that this boy might have absorbed the Chaos Blast that accidentally hit him. The boy was scared, and asked if he was going to be alright. Sonic told him that Shadow was a good friend, and that this power wouldn't change him in anyway other than making him stronger. Sonic started to think that this kid could be a good friend, and a great help in many battles. So he asked the kid if his parents would be alright with him if he stayed at his place and trained. The boy said that he had no parents since they were dead. Then Sonic said, "Then let's go! What's your name, kid? Just the first name is fine." The boy replied,"My name... is Ezra!"



Good and long Bios, huh. Oh well...
If you like this, I'm going to make a Fanfic with a more detailed version of this and more[like a series] tommarow[ can't spell that right either]. More fighting than anything. I can't give you an excact time because... it's unpredictable! Bye!

That's a good improvement! Don't be afraid to give him some strengths, too. A perfectly balanced character is a good base for great stories and RPs to come!

He seems like an interesting character; I can't wait to read about him!

Thank's, Ash!

Man, they're alot of fan characters. I only have 1[that is being used] and other people have 2 or 3. Nothing bad about that, but I'm happy with just 1.
Game on, [get your] Game On!
Yugioh Gx Theme that is Eppppppicccccc!!!!!!

Full Name:* Sir Bedivere, Knight Of The Round Table
Nicknames: Bedivere, Sir Bedivere
Age:* 17
Gender: Male
Species: Chameleon
Personality: Quiet and calm, but also cautious and sceptical of anything that seems fictitious.
Likes: beating people in sword duels, especially Gawain, Galahad or Lancelot
Dislikes: anyone who beats him or can see him when he is trying to be stealthy, evil
Family: None known
Friends: Lancelot, Percival, Lamorak, Galahad, Gawain, Sonic
Enemies: Any evildoers, possibly Merlina due to her past
Strengths: Stealth, speed, swordsmanship
Weakness: Can't take much damage
Description: (Color, size, etc..)* Based hugely on Espio The Chameleon. Cream skin, purple fur (scales?), yellow horn, armour on knees, elbows, hands, feet, head and shoulders.
As seen in: (You can list the fan-fics this character has been in) Sonic & The Mysterious Rogue
Bios/Story:* Sir Bedivere's birthplace, birthday and ancestry are unknown. When he was born, he was immediately apprenticed to Uther Pendragon. His parents were killed shortly afterwards. Bedivere learnt the ways of knights and trained against the other knights when he was old enough, Gawain, Percival, Lamorak, he even beat Lancelot at one point. When he was old enough to go on quests, he went with Lancelot to explore the Dragon's Lair. When the Earth Dragon had Bedivere cornered and worried, Lancelot came and shoved Arondight up the beast's snout, forcing it to retreat into the cave. Since then, Bedivere has resolved to be more careful and aware.