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    Post by SMS Skull Leader June 4th 2010, 4:45 am

    Very well done character there Pur, also liked the reference to the comic, which you even titled XD

    Also loved how you found a way to tie Emma to your favorite character, Charmy.
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    Post by Alex The Hedgehog June 13th 2010, 7:11 pm

    Here's my fan fiction character

    Full name: Alex the hedgehog
    Nickname: Alex (He doesn't have a nickname)
    Gender: Male
    Quote: "I hate it when you Jinx me Crimson."
    Apperance: looks like shadow except with dark yellow stripes, sky blue rings around his wrists and ankles, and deep blue eyes.
    Age: 16
    Powers: Chaos control, chaos spear, Chaos Shield, Spear fists, chaos clone, chaos blast, thunder burst, Hyper kick, Huge energy in his body that he doesn't know how to use, and the ability to run faster than the speed of sound, (Just like Sonic), can sense the chaos shards; which no one else but himself can.
    (Some powers will be discribed later)
    Strengths: land, sometimes water (He can swim), friendship.
    Weaknesses: Dedication to Blaze the cat, (He would rather die than let her die.) often makes embarrassing mistakes, nervouse around girls (unless their helping him save the world)
    You may have seen me from: Alex the hedgehog: the chaos shards
    Power Discription: Thunder burst, an inherited ability that allows Alex to shoot a Devestating Electric beam. Chaos clone, this makes duplicates of Alex, that can assist him, and disorient opponents. Chaos shield, this power lets Alex create a barrier around himself that can protect him from most attacks. Spear fists, this gives Alex round, thick spear heads around his fists that can burn through flesh and penetrate any metal. Hyper Kick, think of a can can, but far faster, and strikes forward. Sensing ability, See fan fiction. Huge energy, this power reaches dangerously high levels, and somehow Alex can live with it. this power comes from the rings around his wrists, the rings around his ankles act like a container, a storage place for when he isn't using this power.

    Well, that's my fan character.


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    Post by the real sonicfan01 June 14th 2010, 2:02 pm

    my fan character is...
    Name Robbie [Hedgehog Form]
    Age 9 [ i know weird?]
    Appears in: Sonic Ulitamte The Comic And Robbie And Friends Adventure
    Personaltys: Robbie Is A Human Boy Who Used A Machine in the Games Arcade to get to sonic s world it also transformed him into a hedgehog giving him powers like sonic he was one of the people who destroyed the zombie curse
    Likes Sonic Tails Knuckles Shadow Jack [His Best Friend]
    Dislikes Zombies [he is scared of them] Amy [Because she loves sonic] Eggman [Everyone Hates Him]
    Look: Robbie is a red hedgehog with manic like hair and blue trousers and light blue jacket and red shoes He is the guy on my avatar [picture]


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    Post by Schnickelfritz June 14th 2010, 2:33 pm

    Name: Blade
    Species: Porcupine
    Age: 16
    Height: 4'
    Fur color: Brown
    Eye color: Brown
    Quotes: ''Well, wasn't that fun?''
    ''I think I have too much blood in my caffeine system...''
    Theme: What It Is- The Dire Straits
    Usually sarcastic, friendly. Can't really jump very high. stronger than Sonic yet is not as fast. He acts sort of like a vigilante, helping where needed, but really, he enjoys living lazily in the Mystic Ruins. He was born in deep forest, but has never known his parents. The reason for this is that when he was young, someone stole him from them. He fights by rolling at high speeds into the foe, stabbing them with his sharp quills. When he was very young, he found his way to a hidden forest hidden by a range of steep hills in the outskirts of the Mystic ruins. he was raised and taught how to read and write by the animals there. This forest was attacked by the Dr. and burned down when he was eleven, and he was the only survivor. He snuck onto a cruise ship that was docked in the Mystic Ruins. there, he met Gareth, who was working as a busboy on the ship. After they disembarked from the ship, Gareth and he went on their separate ways, but Blade followed Gareth.Gareth was living in the forest with his sister. He found that they were both in the same boat, not having any parents, so they started to live near eachother. Gareth thinks of Blade as a little brother.
    Types of quills:
    Regular- These quills are around a half-inch at the diameter at the bottom. They can be used for a wide array of things, but they have no specialty. Blade has the most of these.
    Heavy- These quills are about 1.5 inches at diameter on the bottom. they are very heavy and can be used to way down things. They also hurt a good bit when you're hit with one, but they're not incredibly sharp, only moderately.
    Light- These are the precision quills. they are a quarter of an inch in diameter. These are very light quills, and are incredibly sharp. they need a lot of precise aim, though, and can be used in an enemy's weak spot.
    Climbing- These quills are about an inch in diameter. They are long rods about 7 inches long, and are very hardy. They are fairly sharp. Blade can use this to climb up walls or rock faces by holding one in each hand and climbing.
    Paralysis: These quills are injected with a paralyzing poison that last about an hour. they are an inch in diameter.
    Serrated- the last type of quill is very thin, but strong. One side of it is serrated and can be used for cutting things like wood.
    Moves: Spin Slash: Blade's form of a Spin Dash. Blade rolls up into a ball and extends his quills. He can charge up and roll in any direction, and cause lots of damage. It can also be used for traction on a slippery surface.
    Quill throw- Blade grabs a quill from his back and can throw it at an enemy, see quill types above. He can regrow quills after a few minutes.
    Spike Meteor: Blade jumps off of a ledge and rolls up, headed fr the ground at high speed, quills outstretched.
    Quill Punch: Blade grabs six quills and puts them between his fingers, using them as punching daggers.
    Super form: Blade loses most of the control over what he does, but he can somewhat influence what goes on. Blade's eyes turn orange, and he emanates with orange energy. He can roll through the sky at the speed of sound in this form, and his spikes extend to over a foot. He can activate this with the Chaos Emeralds, Master Emerald, or when in danger of death. He can also activate it by himself if he concentrates extremely hard, but the energy it takes to do this causes him to be unconscious after using the form, and unable to attack for a while.
    Weaknesses: He's not that fast when he's not rolling. He can't jump too high. once he runs out or loses all of his quills, he's pretty much helpless until he regains them. His sarcasm and will to fight often get the best of him.

    Name: X-333 ZETA
    Species: Robot
    Time of creation unknown.
    Height: 5' 9”
    Black and yellow colored.
    Red eyes
    Theme: Cliffs of Dover- Eric Johnson
    Created by Professor Gerald Robotnik as the being made to defeat the BioLizard. When he was presumed a failed experiment, he was sent down to the Earth. After Shadow hit the Earth after the fight with the FinalHazard, he was awakened and discovered by Dr. Eggman. He is slightly larger than Omega and has a bigger build. Can shoot heat beams from his eyes and missiles from his hands, plus an assortment of lazers and guns all over his body.
    Weaknesses: Too much water short circuits him, he is made to serve Eggman, which is pretty bad.

    Name: Gareth
    Species: Echidna
    Age: 21
    Height: 4'5''
    Fur color: Black
    Eye color: Teal
    Quotes: ''Confidence is ignorance. If you're getting cocky, you don't know something.''
    Theme: Baba O'Riley: The Who
    Mostly keeps to himself, doesn't talk much. Usually when he does talk, you should listen to him. He looks like Knuckles with black fur, no punching gloves, and his dread locks are shorter and go back a bit further. He wears black leather gloves and a Dark blue vest, usually has sunglasses, and black heavy duty rain boots. At his belt he has a sword hilt, which he can pull out and imbue with electric energy to use as a blade, and when he forces it into the ground it can streak out lightning. He can also cause shockwaves through his palms if pressed against something. Although he doesn't keep sides, he usually fights for the greater good. Gareth was born and raised by two loving parents, and his father fought in the army. When his father was killed in a fight, Gareth vowed he'd get back at the enemy army. (Eggman's) He needed to work, however, to build a better life for his mother, so he took a job on a cruise ship. One day he returned to find a note from his mother that said she ran away, and not to look for her. After this day, Gareth completely sealed his heart off from anybody but his younger sister. He kept the job for a little while after, but one day he decided would be his last, coincidentally the day he met Blade.
    Moves:
    Lightning Sword: Gareth takes his hilt and imbues energy into it, using it as a blade.
    Shockwave: Gareth plunges his sword into the earth and sends up a wall of electricity going in all directions around it.
    Electroshock: Gareth pushes his palm up against an enemy and sends electricity through them, blowing them back
    Electrokinesis: Gareth can send a bolt of lightning at anything and create a stasis field around it with which he can manipulate the object.
    Bolt: Gareth sends a bolt of lightning into the air, causing a lightning storm.
    Lightning ball: Gareth puts his hands out facing eachother, about a foot apart. He sends electricity from one at the other, until a ball of electricity is formed between them which he can hurl at an enemy.
    Super form: Gareth turns completely white, and his eyes turn a dark blue. He has no control over what he does in this form, but his form will go after what caused him to go into it. He can control electricity with this form, and cause massive damage. This is a highly hazardous form, and if he has contact with water in it, he will die. This form cannot be self-induced, unless he has the Chaos Emeralds or Master Emerald. If he uses the emeralds to go into the form, he can have a little control over it. This form can also come out if he feels immense inner pain and sadness, and when he goes into the form, he will go after the one who caused the sadness.
    Weaknesses: WATER, terribly bad for him, just a little can kill him. His attachment to his sister sometimes hinders him.

    Nathan
    Species: Falcon
    Age: 17
    Height: 3'11''
    Wingspan: 6'
    Color: Light and Dark brown
    Eye color: Grey
    Quotes: ''How's the weather down there?''
    Theme:On Every Street: the Dire Straits
    Nathan is blind. He can fly well by using echolocation, however, and can see pretty much 97% of everything he'd regularly see. He attacks by slicing with his wings, and he can fly for a s long as he wants, quite quickly. He is also capable of running somewhat speedily. He can't swim.
    Nathan looks sort of like one of the bird people in Wind Waker. He usually can be pretty laid back, but he won't talk about his past with anyone and he always seems like he has done something he's ashamed of. He fights for the good side. He was good friends with Blade in the forest, but Blade thought he had died in the fire. He later discovers he's alive when when he's 15.
    Moves:
    Wing Slice: Nathan uses his sharp wings to slice and hack at an enemy.
    Feather Volley: While in the air, Nathan can send down a volley of sharp feathers at a foe.
    Beak attack: Nathan uses his beak to stab at an enemy, which can also expose any weak points.
    Dive bomb: While airborne, Nathan can tuck in his wings and swoop down at high speeds to hit an enemy.
    Spiral flight: Nathan spreads his wings out and glides quickly in a spiral pattern at an airborne enemy, using his beak and wings.
    Super form: Nathan's wings light on fire, and his eyes completely turn red. He can control himself in this form, that is to say he is still in control over his emotions and his body. He can fly and glide at incredible speeds in this form, and he streaks fire behind him where he goes. He can also shoot fire down from his wings, and when he divebombs into anyone, it can guarantee a lot of damage. He goes into this form when angered, so it's a good idea to stay on his good side. He can also self-induce this form with the Chaos Emeralds and Master Emerald, and by himself. However, if he does it himself, it doesn't last long, and afterward, he won't be able to fly for a while.
    Weaknesses: His blindness, he can't see some things and can't read. He is also a sucker for any young lady...

    Name: Kiera
    Species: Echidna
    Age: 18
    Height: 4'3''
    Fur Color: Light brown
    Eye Color: Orange
    Quotes: ''You wish you could fight like a girl.'' ''Ladies first!''
    Theme: Miss Murder: AFI
    She can run pretty quickly, but is a very experienced swimmer. She is much stronger on land however. She draws her power from the earth, and can manipulate it a little. When she is knocked down, the earth can heal her, and it is very hard to kill her on land. she learned to swim and practiced it a lot so she could be safer. She can change a rock into any shape she wants in her hand. She has a gun which can be loaded with sharpened rocks, and a sword which can be fortified with rocks.
    She usually wears a black pair of gaucho pants with dark brown short-sleeved shirt on top. She always ties her long hair back with a ponytail, and has one hoop in her left ear. she is quite sassy, and bites back, hard. She can get a bit hot-tempered as well. She was raised by her parents until her father died, and she was out when her mother left. After that, she started living in the forest with Gareth. She has a crush on Blade, but he is completely oblivious to it.
    Moves:
    Rock fist: Kiera summons earth up to cover her fist, maximizing punching power.
    Earth Blade: Kiera covers her sword with small stones, making it much harder.
    Earth Rush: Kiera moves the ground underneath her, propelling her toward an enemy full speed to attack.
    Rock volley: Kiera takes many small pointed stones and fires them at an enemy.
    Earthquake: Kiera causes a small earthquake in her vicinity. This takes a lot of energy.
    Super Form: Kiera starts to emanate white energy, and her eyes turn completely white. In this state she can completely control the element of earth, and is quite a force to be reckoned with. She has control over herself in this form, but can be easily angered in it. In other words, she is somewhat emotionally unstable. She can dig under the earth and move through it incredibly quickly in this form. She can go into this form with the Chaos Emeralds, Master emerald, or if she becomes incredibly afraid, especially for her or someone else's life.
    Weaknesses: Water, although she has trained up a good immunity, and she is stricken with terrible vertigo. If there is no ground around her, she is quite weak.
    My human character (I use him for all intents and necessary purposes) is Matt Mark Sumner, usually quite funny and friendly, can be sarcastic.

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    Post by Miffleflurp June 14th 2010, 11:41 pm

    Name: Death Crystal
    Species: Hedgehog
    Gender: Female
    Age: 16
    Personality: Quiet, hotheaded, depressed, emo, and wants to run and not stop ever, which is not gonna happen.
    Quotes: (she says these in a sarcastic voice) "Oh, i'm Sorry", and "I don't remember a thing."
    Voice actor: Me, myself, and I
    Theme songs: Headstrong - Trapt, Live Free or Let Me Die - Skillet, Monster - Skillet, Taking Over Me - Evanesence, Haunted - Kelly Clarkson, Missing - Evanesence, Cry - Faith Hill, Numb - Linkin Park!, ect...
    Description: Black fur with blue tips on hair, purple highlights. Ponytail and long bangs, covers her one scarred eye. Red, black eyes, one of which is scarred. No sleeve black shirt that hangs of shoulders, grey studded cloth over lapping overshirt and blue tank top underneath, Soul Eater skull printed on shirt on top. Black rolled up pants with chain around waist with black and red Crystal attached. High heeled black boots with purple studded stripe running up middle of boots. One shackle around right ankle that was stuck there after she escaped capture. Chain necklace with a purple crystal on it. And skull earings.
    Weapons: Two huge scythes that come out of her lower arms that can tranform into twin pistols.
    Abilitys: Death shot: she shoots her pistols rappidly at each target till they all die, Blood ridden battlefield: she charges into battle almost unconciosly and kills all enimies in sight but absorbs thier energy causing no blood to spill and comes out without a scratch, Shade demon: a dark creature comes out of nowhere and kills everything she wants it to. She can also use her crystals to transport and contact others, and can project her memories into peoples heads.
    Strengths: Faster than Sonic and Shadow put together, very stong and agile.
    Weakneses: Very low defense and stamina, battle crazed, and Shadow. She faints frequently and lost her memory at the age of 1 and had no further memories till the age of 15.
    Bio: Death was born on an unknown planet far away to a family with many children. 2 days later thier planet was destroyed, but their family was given a new life on Sonic's world. They were all seperated and lost thier memories. Death ended up near Dr. Eggmans lair and he could not wake her up for 15 years, Around the same time Shadow was reawakened. Death escaped soon enough and ran as fast as she could for 10 miles. She crashed into a rock at top speeds causing her to faint near mystic ruins. There she met Knuckles and he took her to see Sonic. Not going to write it all down here. I will post a fan fiction about it.

    I know xshadowclawx and her fan character is mines sister thats why they have simalar storys.
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    It's true I do know miffle!
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    Post by The Prodigious Ult Zerda July 11th 2010, 12:18 am

    Allow me to introduce Ultimate Zerda. ^^

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    PERSONAL INFORMATION

    Full Name- Ultimate Shadowclaw Zerda
    Nick Names- The Voice of the Tales, the Vengeance Pioneer
    Age- 32
    IQ- 191
    Birthplace- Kingdom of Nagrand
    DOB- October 13
    Species- Hedgehog
    Race- Nagrandian
    Religion- Nasuu ( The faith of more than one god. Supposedly Nagrand gods. )

    ADDED INFORMATION

    Average Speed- 23 - 47 mph
    Weight- 30lbs
    Height- 3'9
    Occupation or Rank- Lord of Nagrand
    Personality- Ult has always been considered the silent among Nagrand. Though, Ult has also been helpful, even in his darkest times. Said to be charming and protective, Ult never thinks other people otherwise, such as sex, religion, weight, height, looks, or personality. He treats everyone the same. Ult however is very merciful, and often giving more than one chances if needed. Merciful, but strict. Ult obeys the laws and rules very strictly, though doesn't enforce them heavily. Currently, Ult has no disorder, which often feels to him very contently.
    Hobbies- Ult is a poet and wrote several books, one being called ' Love. ' He knows how to play many instruments very well his favorite being the piano and acoustic guitar.
    Phobias- Though it is hard to figure out his phobias, he has a small fear of fire. Also having a small fear of sinking into something such as quick sand.
    Weaknesses- Ult's left eye-scar is said to many rivals to him, the ' Golden cut of pain ' for when someone hits Ult on or near his scar, he experiences agony. Ult however, always had a bad right arm, reasons unknown on how it is always in slightly pain, but it never infers because Ult is left-handed.
    Advantages- Having a deep sorrow and anger fuels him with power, reaching at some point a deadly and irreversible metamorphosis named ' Pure Dark. ' In which he transforms into a pure dark deity. Also in his meditation, Ult develop the power of keen hearing and smelling, he calls it simply K-9.
    Main Theme Song- " I'm Not Jesus " By Apocalyptica

    RELATIONSHIPS

    FATHERS' SIDE

    Grandmother- Shadea Zerda.
    Grandfather- Dushup Zerda.
    Father- Marrcero Zerda.

    MOTHERS' SIDE.

    Grandmother- Minda Deahha
    Grandfather- Leador Deahha
    Aunt- SezhhaTeracaccpa
    Mother- Zilina Zerda

    SIBLINGS

    Older Brother- Duvius ' Dante ' Zerda

    FAMILY

    Wife- Erica Zerda
    Daughter- Caitlyn Zerda
    Son- Nicolas Zerda

    FRIENDS, RIVALS, & ENEMIES

    Close Friends- Margaret, Kary, Tera, Amy Rose, Eclipse
    Friends- Typhoon, Tails, Blaze, Ammi, Kuniomaru
    Rivals- Kai, Zxesius, Captain Stormblast
    Enemies- Shatterith Von Heardi, Alexis Repton, Xepher Repton.
    Sworn Nemeses- Reptiod Repton, Mephiles the Dark.

    ~DEAD

    FAMILY- Dushup Zerda, Minda Deahha, Leador Deahha, Zilina Zerda, Duvius ' Dante ' Zerda.
    FRIENDS- Castlina Tinardo.
    ENEMIES- Perfect Death.

    Marrcero Zerda has disappeared and cannot be found~

    FIGHTING

    Fighting Style- Ult has one of the most unique fighting styles. Taking similarities from Spanish 15th century fighting, and some Romanian history styles, Ult as well has perfect control of hearing and seeing, sensing vibrations on the ground, floor and such.
    Fighting Weapons- His main weapon he has used for quiet sometime is a Rapier. He calls it the Bailarin Volador, or Flying Dancer. Ult as well has another Rapier called the Heroe marcado, or Scarred Hero. The last weapon he has is his typical Lord Blade called Lama de Natura, or Blade of Nature, but he rarely uses it

    Basic Stats: 1 - lowest, 40 - highest

    Agility - 29
    Speed - 18
    Strength - 33
    Defense - 31
    Evasiveness - 26
    Dexterity - 26
    Intelligence - 38
    Battle skill - 38

    PERSONAL INTEREST

    Likes- Ult loves to be content. So he often likes silent rooms, or forest's of which he can meditate. He is also a very excellent artist of poetry and sculpturing.
    Dislikes- Ult isn't much to relax however. He needs something to do. He dislikes sitting around if he can't meditate, dislikes playing any board games, dislikes the beach, and Amusement Parks for some reason.
    Mood- He is always content, never showing much emotion, and if he does its hard to see. Keeping the normal gazed look made him who he is.

    10 FUN FACTS

    - Ult never once wield a gun. He always said ' Guns are for the pathetic and weak. '
    - He had only 10 changes since his creation.
    - Ult's first name was originally ShadowUltimate, but later change to emphasize his middle name of being Shadow.
    - Nagrandian is considered a ' Spanish Race ' And Nagrandian Language is European Spanish, which is why his blades are all named from the European Spanish Language.
    - Ult and Reptoid are Currently the only characters from 2005 that had not yet disappeared, hence why they are sworn enemies from day one.
    - Ult has become partially blind in his left now
    - Caitlyn, his daughter, is more similar to Ult than Nicolas.
    - Ult wrote one poetry collections known as " Love. " Love was the poem based from my personal poem, " Suicidal Howl. "
    - Ult is the oldest among age and appearance.
    - Ironically, Ult isn't the strongest character anymore due to his age.

    HISTORY

    " Stay Strong, Live life, my children " Were Zilina's last words before the virus took her in. Ult hadn't realize that she was dead until he was 5 years old, 2 years after the death. Ult lived a quiet life for the next year after he found out clearly, then, The Demonic War began.

    " Wretched scourge of Hell, we will send you back from where you came! " Announced Lord Marrcero Zerda, charging at the hordes of demons. The battle between Nagrand and Demons stretched towards nearly 8 months, but the demons retreated after wards. Victory set in, and Nagrandians cheered, all but the last Zerda's, Ult and Marrcero, celebrating a victory of a funeral, of Duvius ' Dante ' Zerda. After the funeral, Ult wandered off into a forbidden staircase. He slowly stepped down each step and found himself outside Nagrand. Just as he was going to head back up, he tripped and slid down the hill Nagrand was resting on.

    Rolling, tumbling, and hurting, Ult came to a stop after several minutes, only to find himself in a plain of grasslands. He wandered, but had no strength, and collapsed of the bleeding. Upon passing out, he was rescued by a young Owl girl, Waking up several hours later in a house, a house called an orphanage.

    Several years he spent in that hostage, no one would care for him, no family would adopt him, so he fled the orphanage at the age of 10, and pursued a life on his own. Evidently, he stumbled on a village known as ' Kaikiori ' and lived among a group of underground children, but was short sided, and left the village for peace and quiet near a lake. Where he though he was alone, he heard crying under a rock, a young green hedgehog emerge from a small rock cave. " Hey, Whats Wrong? " Ult asked gently placing his hand on her shoulder. " Those mean kids! "

    The conversation lasted more than enough time for her to get out. " What's your name anyway? I'm Ultimate! "
    " Um,... I don't know... "
    Ult was thinking slightly and came up for a name for her, a life-long name. The lake was named ' Cast Line Lake, ' which Ult gave the green hedgehog girl, ' Castlina '

    They begun to hang out together, watched each other back for many years. They lived together, battled foes together, eventually, Castlina became Ult's first girlfriend. Ult had big plans, and began reading countless books, and he learned how to levitate with ease. Ult was at his happiest he had ever been, even forgotten about his homeland Nagrand. But things wouldn't live up forever. Mephiles the Dark, a shadowy deity terrorized they city where they were. Castlina and Ult were split, but just when Ult thought he had found Castlina, the worse had come, Mephiles sending a puppet just like her, upon Ult hitting the puppet, he was struck, across the eye, leaving him a forever scar at age 14.

    Ult transformed into his cursed form after seeing Castlina injured, and murdered Mephiles with his claws. Ult had to leave Castlina, he didn't want to see him like that again, during that same year, he left Castlina, and levitated across the world, but was shortly stopped. Dr. Robotnik's fleets, mistaken him for Shadow the Hedgehog, and shot him down into a forest. Ironically, the forest where he was born in. Nagrand Forest. He was treated by his wounds, and gave him a tittle called Prince Ult. After a year, the original lord was confirmed dead, and was succeeded by the second born, Ult Zerda, became the youngest lord at age 15.

    Ult Studied more, traveled more, and eased life more. He was first among anyone to map out the entire atlas with a lot of detail. When he was mapping out Everest City, he felt extremely cold, and had to seek shelter, which brought attention to his close friend, Margaret. He was quickly grateful and cared, and eventually left her house with a bonding friendship. At the same time, he met a girl named Erica Clover. A Pink but cute teenage cat. She was interested in him and instantly became friends.

    Returning back to Nagrand, due to his charismatic personality he held, he was dubbed God of Life. At the same time, Castlina returned, and remained excellent friends. Things lived up again. Heading to Everest City far south of Nagrand to meet his new girlfriend, Erica.

    But things became more serious. An old rival of Ult, Alexis Repton, returned to plead to Ult, when Ult rejected, Alexis mistaken Castlina for Ult's girlfriend, and killed Castlina with her blade. Seconds later, Ult summoned his godly power, and ripped Alexis' body apart.
    " You had betray the laws of Nagrand, worse of all, you have betrayed me! I sentence you to immediate death! Prepare to Die!! "
    Roughly enough, it was a shower of Blood, and Ult was not only banished from Nagrand, the Gods of Nagrand removed his tittle as God of Life, and Ult became mortal once again. Ult wandered the world in search of answers. He went back to where it all started, Scrap City, when into a small chapel, and diminished his dark powers. But it was too much, the chapel burned to the ground with black flames. He returned to Nagrand after strict punishment, 60 days of hard labor, and isolation for 2 weeks. Eventually, he became Lord once again at age 17.

    Things lived up. Even the conceited war known as the ' Xephaiven War ' where another Reptiod, Xepher Reptiod, challenged Nagrand to avenge his sister's death, was easy and short. Only 2 weeks and Nagrand won. Ult gave him a chance, Xepher fled. Couple years later, Erica and Ult were married. And had two children a year after the marriage. Caitlyn and Nicolas Zerda, age 4. They play an important role to Ult, he wants them to have the life he never had.

    A few years had past and Ult still cannot find his father. His children, now 7, are growing up the way he wanted his life to go. Simple. Easy. Lately, Ult has been experiencing more gray furs than usual. Erica says it is a sign of some type of rapid aging disorder, as others say it's his stress that causing them to turn so rapidly. Still able to run, walk, and climb, Ult looks older almost everyday. His wrinkles tend to increase around the hands, and sometimes around the cheek. Ult is coughing slightly more violently and his voice has begun to show more of a pitiful hoarse. However, he still fights.

    Recently, he has been told he has a half-brother, Arguel Zerda. The new son of his fathers. He tends to hunt him and his father down by any means necessary and finally return his vengeance.

    Character Creation- August 15, 2005.

    6TH ANNIVERSARY
    " I've never heard of joy. I was robbed for everything I hoped and dreamed. Nothing means the same anymore. " ~ Ult Zerda.
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    Post by Shade July 19th 2010, 1:53 pm

    I have a new fan character I would like to introduce:

    Full Name: Sylvia Horchester
    Age:16
    Strengths: She is physically very strong, and can body-slam people very easily.
    Description: 6'5" tall, long, blonde curly hair, drop-dead gorgeous
    Bios/Story: She is very beautiful, and was a cheerleader in her early days at school. She went into university at 18, and graduated in a year, and another year later got a doctorate in banking. She is now a banking accountant, and she has a boyfriend (who is rather mysterious). She also doubles as an M15 agent, though, and a spy, and leads a very interesting life.
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    Post by Auflodern July 19th 2010, 3:31 pm

    Kritz the German Mechanic and his friend Jodl

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    Kritz a retired Eurofighter pilot and Jodl a respected defense lawyer met each other when Jodl was defending Kritz against the recent plumbing Kritz did that resulted in 3 deaths 14 injuries and 5 ice cold showers Jodl and Kritz won the case when Kritz sowed exactly how he repaired the dishwasher and gave each of the jury a new car from his younger brother Lou's car company... Volkswagon! Jodl and Kritz then went on adventures to stop the eevil Prime Minister Tony Blaire and Former President George W. Bush from playing an eeeeevil game of Civilization.
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    Post by edward_the_fox July 25th 2010, 10:54 am

    Edward the Fox
    Hello My name is Edward The Fox Iam 16. I usualy ride my yamma motorcycle around to get to my friends' houses because We are acually very far from Marxus City Witch is the city of the sky I also have a hoverbike wich can help me fly to Marxus High My Best Friend Is Jake the Racoon.My Favorite Color is Ox Blood A darker shade of red. My Theme song is: it is a song
    My Element is steel. My Girlfriend's name is Kagomai The Fox She has beutiful pink fur. well anyways my main weapon is duel pistols and swords. My favorite food is meat.
    if i did this wrong sorry it was on my computer so i copied it and the pasted this.
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    Post by Zez July 26th 2010, 3:43 pm

    edward_the_fox wrote: Edward the Fox
    Hello My name is Edward The Fox Iam 16. I usualy ride my yamma motorcycle around to get to my friends' houses because We are acually very far from Marxus City Witch is the city of the sky I also have a hoverbike wich can help me fly to Marxus High My Best Friend Is Jake the Racoon.My Favorite Color is Ox Blood A darker shade of red. My Theme song is: it is a song
    My Element is steel. My Girlfriend's name is Kagomai The Fox She has beutiful pink fur. well anyways my main weapon is duel pistols and swords. My favorite food is meat.
    if i did this wrong sorry it was on my computer so i copied it and the pasted this.

    Try copy/pasting here: https://sonicommunity.forumotion.com/introductions-f26/
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    Post by Auflodern July 26th 2010, 7:07 pm

    Zez wrote:
    edward_the_fox wrote: Edward the Fox
    Hello My name is Edward The Fox Iam 16. I usualy ride my yamma motorcycle around to get to my friends' houses because We are acually very far from Marxus City Witch is the city of the sky I also have a hoverbike wich can help me fly to Marxus High My Best Friend Is Jake the Racoon.My Favorite Color is Ox Blood A darker shade of red. My Theme song is: it is a song
    My Element is steel. My Girlfriend's name is Kagomai The Fox She has beutiful pink fur. well anyways my main weapon is duel pistols and swords. My favorite food is meat.
    if i did this wrong sorry it was on my computer so i copied it and the pasted this.

    Try copy/pasting here: https://sonicommunity.forumotion.com/introductions-f26/
    I think he was introducing his furry/character in 1st person mode... Or he has a dual personality...
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    Post by The Prodigious Ult Zerda July 27th 2010, 11:17 pm

    Shatterith Von Heardi. o3o

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    PERSONAL INFORMATION

    Birth Name- Shatterithlius Vondels Heardilious. ( In Native Tongue: Ødelegg Mitt Hjerte. )
    Common Name- Shatterith Von Heardi
    Nick Names- The Invaluable Phantom, A Whirlwind of Hate, Despotic Satan, " Oh, Dreadful Angel. "
    Age- 53 and Immortal
    IQ- 201
    Birthplace- Skjult Tenner Topp. ( Obscured Light Peak )
    DOB- January Second
    Species- Demonic Hedgehog
    Race- Demonic Sør
    Religion- Satanist. ( Belief over Satan. )
    Theme Songs: Shatterith has a few. He follows by these 3.
    1. " The Sacrilegious Scorn " by Dimmu Borgir
    2. " The Insight and the Catharsis " by Dimmu Borgir
    3. " The Invaluable Darkness " by Dimmu Borgir
    Famous Quote;
    " My word, and World holds ground that is real. My world doesn't consume of floods that are poisoned water, and languages that are spit from different tongues. It consumes of power, discipline, and righteous redemption that no normal being can posses. "
    Other Quotes;
    " My Angel, Give me this one chance to live. I've desired another life- and this time I won't lose it. "
    " Time to take back what you took from me,... Death! "
    " I can never be corrupted upon your righteous beliefs. I protect every man guilty of sin, and I follow by laws of such, laws that once bothered me in resentment cleared and troubles me no more. "
    " William Congreve.... William Blake..... GUIDE ME your knowledge of this world- and allow me to succeed. "

    ADDED INFORMATION

    Average Speed- 20 - 41 mph.
    Weight- 47lbs
    Height- 4'11
    Occupation or Rank- Lord of the Demonic Sør and Colonel of the Nordlig Legion Demons.
    Personality- As a part as an infamous villain, he's famous for his calm content personality, but as well as intimidation with the look. Considering Shatterith speaks rarely, thus making him very frightful. However though he rarely speaks, he is incredibility inhuman during his work. Described as intellectual and powerful, Heardi has this unyielding emotion he announced himself as " Cata... " and continues with " Cata-love " or " Cata-content. " Cata is a prefix meaning Under, Down, or Low. He doesn't believe he possess the emotion, Love, Like, Care, and Mercy.
    Hobbies- It is very uncertain that Shatterith has ANY hobbies. Though, he plays the piano very well which is considered his Hobby, and playing it when he awaits for something or draws a mood to visitors. He's known to play his 13minute piano solo, called " Synke Fornøyelser på Kongen ( Sinking Pleasures upon the King ) " which has a very depression and almost frightening melodies and tones.
    Phobias- Actually, Shatterith is afraid of Swimming. Also afraid of Snow for an unknown apparent reason.
    Weakness- Even though Shatterith is one of the most unknown and frightening characters, he is also the easiest to decipher a weakness. Having only one, the power of Divinity, Light, Holy, or some type of Love injures him. However...
    Advantages- Shatterith has a blind eye under his fur. He calls it the " Void of Heaven's Radiance. " If any of his weakness endures him, he pushes his fur back and allows his eye to absorb it. Also having a clearly distinctive weakness, Shatterith has develop his own advantages. One being Shadows. He can morph or even transport into other shadows around his demonic world. Also, having the ability to steal away the good in a foe and transform the foe into a shadow being. The more hate you have, the longer he can control.

    RELATIONSHIPS

    FATHERS SIDE

    Father- Xlenderius Despittes Heardi

    MOTHERS SIDE

    Mother- Dsendra Heardi

    SIBILINGS

    Sister- Serioa Heardi
    Cousin- Xerberus Heardi

    FAMILY

    Master- Djevel Flamme. ( Sorgens. )
    Dragon- Mørk Skigåer fra Helvete

    FRIENDS, RIVALS, & ENEMIES

    Close Friends- Spiuteai Oålimg, Siit'Drak Hallow, Reptiod Repton, and Verhas Legato.
    Rivals- Xepher Repton, Alexis Repton, Xerberus Heardi
    Enemies- Lord Ultimate Zerda, Neox Zevork, Solstice Urushima, King Himmel Lys.
    Sworn Nemesis- Lord Ultimate Zerda

    DEAD~

    FAMILY- Mother- Dsendra Heardi, Sister- Serioa Heardi
    RIVALS- Alexis Repton

    FIGHTING

    Fighting Style- Having the most powerful but slowest style, his style is called Flyende Død til Helveter og Himmel, which is a merge fighting mix of Heaven and Hell, Angel and Demonic warfare. It is rare to learn a both segment of heaven and hell but Shatterith learned it and mastered it. He is also the master of hellish properties. Having the power of Satan with him. Rumored that Shatterith also possess power of a " Metal Angel. " He calls it " Engel. "
    Fighting Weapon- Shatterith carries only two blades, its a blunt square-end blade called Innsiktblad vet det demoniske blodet. It drips demonic blood eternity. Shatterith often uses this blade to disgust people by showing the blade's inside organs of a past demon still wedged inside. The other is a Steal long blade he stole from an Angel while visiting the " heaven " section of his world. The blade has angels emblazoned over it's steal. He whipped his own blood on each and every one of the angels, vandalizing them into inverted Crosses.

    PERSONAL INTEREST

    Likes- Shatterith often enjoys watching through his window on the top of his ruined castle and gaze over the ****** site of a bloody aftermath. He also likes the sounds of melodic pianos and voices that are almost opera like.
    Dislikes- He hates the sun, which where he lives there is no sun. He despises love and caring in anyway.
    Mood- Shatterith has one of the most disgusting moods. His castle itself is nearly a fallen ruin, but some corrupt magic keeps it towering. But inside the castle, cob-webs, blood, guts, hearts, organs, eyes, it almost seems like a corrupted horror film. In his throne room, Blood trips from the ceiling everyday unending and the castle itself is said to make moaning noises, as a lost of it's former master. The very base of the castle is an eye that never closes. He is also known for his silent and unyielding personality.

    10 FUN FACTS

    - Shatterith was previously named Shagore, but was changed later, meaning to his name Shatter, Heardi meaning Heart. Von meaning His or Own, Shatter his Heart.
    - He only had 3 changes since his creation
    - Demonic Sør is considered a Norwegian Race, but set in more darker times, as if Norway was cast into the realms of darkness.
    - He's currently the last villain i created.
    - Him being satanist would often spark up more wars and scare other people.
    - Originally, Shatterith was an Echinda.
    - Shatterith was suppose to be a demon form of Neox Zevork, however I felt he needed to be a main character.
    - At the time of his creation, he has quickly been renown as the Satanic Pioneer and the Figure of the Blacken Evil.
    - Shatterith has a daughter named " Mindla. " She is a beautiful demonic female created from the genes of Shatterith. Created- not born.
    - I avoid Shatterith in roleplays- however I make reference to him a lot while I'm role playing with Ult.

    HISTORY

    "The way of the Satan was born"
    Dsendra, The Mother of the Satanic demon, Shatterith, but she wasn't satanic, nor was Shatterith. Dsendra was said to believe she was the descendants of ' The Goddess of Fire ' and it seemed true. Her fire powers were powerful enough to turn a small city into hell. But she used her powers for good, she was once a commander of the ' Fire Steel Raiders ' When she was young. When she got pregnant at the age of 23, the youngest commander had to give up her spot to give birth to the demon Shatterith. Xlenderius, ' The Master of Dark ' didn't surrender his duty of suppling new dark magic. So when Shatterith was a kid, he basically had his Mother. Dsendra grew tired of Xlenderius and almost went into divorced.

    At the time when Shatterith was 6, and his parents started having problems, he found the books of darkness Xlenderius had. Shatterith started to read each book entirely. He had a lot of time since he couldn't go to school, nor did he was home schooled. He taught himself in the ways of Darkness and Hell. The bond of the devil with him grew. He started to ignore his mothers' directions to pursue his learning. His sister, then came.

    Couple months, Dsendra had Serioa. Serioa was a cute dark fur girl, but had no arm when born. Dsendra was protective to her first daughter, and so other than placing her in death, she used her godly fire magic to build her a metallic arm. With magic from Xlenderius, the arm grew with her.

    Shatterith was now 13, while Serioa, was 7. Shatterith and Serioa weren't getting along as brothers and sisters should. Shatterith tried to make her read the books he has been reading since the age of 6, but it didn't work. In fact, Serioa was learning Holy magic. Which made Shatterith and Serioa get into a lot of fights. Shatterith was unable to do something, and Serioa only ignored his warnings and threats.

    Shatterith was at his highest at the age of 30, but Serioa, older by being 24, she always prevented Shatterith by using his dark magic upon people with her holy magic. Shatterith was getting irritated by her and started to declare a war. Shatterith came defeated at the end. Serioa had more power than Shatterith with her metal arm, which had the immune of Darkness.

    "Deaths and the growth of darkness"
    Shatterith was growing old, as well as his father and sister. His mother, died on the day of Shatteriths' birth, she died by Shatteriths' hands. Serioa Stood up and declared another fight between Shatterith. Xlendarius went missing when Shatterith was 41. So the fight of the family brought into war. The battle lasted months, but, on Halloween night, the same year of their mothers death, brought upon Serioa. Shatterith broke her metal arm and finished her with the power of hell. At that moment, he gained the power of Satan. His eyes grew fire red, but Serioa wasn't going down easy, she sent one last holy spell into Shatteriths left eye, which made that eye blind forever. Shatterith yelled and fire raged in his hands. A fire of a thousand flames, the satanic fire ' Solemn Fire ' breech and casted upon Serioa. Later, she was turned into ash. Sadly, at that moment, he realized of what he had done in his life. He regrets the day he became a Satanic minion.

    Shatterith grew weak after the battle. His anger plundered and was replaced with misery. He will never forget the day of the massacre. Today, he seeks for his Father, the Master of Darkness, and asked to be replaced of these darken powers. Sadly, he has yet to find his father. He wishes to return his sister and his mother with holy magic, than to bring them back as corrupted demons. He wishes to give up the powers of darkness forever..and replace the bidding he claims. The bidding, of the devil.

    " The War Never Ends"
    Shatterith eventually died during an epic battle with a dragon named Gladius. Shatterith was thought to be dead, but was never confirmed. Body was never found. He was dead, but with his last ounce of power, he sent himself in a state of frozen fertility and healed his wounds for a decade. Time later, the ice melted and Shatterith rebirth as the undead prince of hell. Sorgens as well gave him one last chance. Roaming the world, laying low building his powers, he read many corrupted magic books, ancient demon books, and more to fuel his success. His IQ changed from 156, to 188, and is still currently reading.

    Shatterith is in secret, building a project gate named; Ånd lån meg Driver, AKA Spirits Lend me Power. Also considered Spiritual Revenge. He currently fuels the gate with fuel and power so it would run. The gate is said to be a time-machine. Shatterith would go back in time to where the Død Omfavnelse er Vår were still around. A horrid demonic race who were whipped out for burning a whole legion to ashes. Repton, however is somewhat involve with it secretly. He is one of the knights of Army Shatterith owns and is known all the blue prints to steal his plan and take control.

    Shatterith's death changed him. Rather having his infamous white combed hair, black dreadlocks, his hair was sliced and is shorter, as his white hair is now black. His two different eye colors remain.

    " A sinister awakening. "
    Following the death of Shatterith by Ultimate Zerda, Reptiod- who was in secrecy in Shatterith's legion, programmed the portal to be open, as the demons entered the world of Ultimate the people he cares. As the demons swarm the area, Reptiod had other plans by resurrecting Shatterith. By doing so, he approach an unknown isle dubbed " Bordir, " which is the landing of the great devil. Reptiod resurrected Shatterith from his own species, making Shatterith a hedgehog than an echnida. As he stood, his new form took shape. His fur was much more longer, he was taller, with the infamous double-parallel scars across his eye. As Shatterith breathed the dark fumes surrounding the area, he called back his army into his world and remained since.

    The war was just a reminder of the infamous and dreadful war, the " Demonic War, " that just ended 32 years ago. Many of my characters, such as Ult, Neox, and Tera, fear another Demonic War, for they, and others, were truly devastated. Ult was born during the last years of the war, losing his brother in K.I.A, and his Mother for the fumes and gases of the Demon Plague. Neox lost his entire village and mother, as Tera blames the Demonic War for her incognito status of who she really is.

    " A New Allegiance "
    Shatterith lays in his stolen castle of nightmare proportions, along side with his allies. Spiuteai Oålimg, Siit'Drak Hallow, and Verhas Legato. Reptiod is considered his personal guard. Shatterith also commands another legion than just his Nordlig Legion. Drømm Frelsere Legion, who are a very feared army that has taken down many opposing enemies.

    Shatterith is considered the most difficult person to kill. For he never enters combat unless he's alone. Since his death that cursed him for so long, Shatterith spends his days waiting for a moment to strike.

    Shatterith was first succeeded by Lord Ultimate Zerda, as the Second Time was defeated by the Dragon Lord Kai Kazama, and once again killed by Ultimate Zerda. Reptiod has had thoughts on killing him- but in the situation now, he doesn't plan on it. Reptiod desires power, and they're power tensions between the two.

    Creation: December 17, 2008
    Creator: Arctarius V ( Ult Zerda. )
    Inspiration: Shargath from Dimmu Borgir, I.C.S Vortex.
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    Post by Bria August 1st 2010, 5:27 am

    I made a fan character a long time ago. I didn't give it any background history, I just did it for fun I suppose. I decided to just try and draw what the heck I remembered about him.

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    Name: Vortex the Dragon
    Species: Dragon
    Gender: Male
    Abilities: Fire breath, flight, strength
    Weakness: Cold climates

    That's about all I got, pfft. I just wanted to make a dragon :D
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    Full Name: Josephine Romano
    Nicknames: Jojo
    Age:21
    Strengths: Melee battle
    Description: Black haired, tanned skin, tall and lean
    Bios/Story: Girlfriend of the mighty Joseph Badrage, she ran the Hells Assassinz Guild for a time. After that guild was dissolved, she joined Joseph Badrage's guild, Hellz Revenge, and serves as an officer in that guild to this very day.

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    Post by cala224 October 18th 2010, 5:24 pm

    :study: Full Name:Carly MiAe IntaH fox
    Nicknames: Cala Intcal Ucalala Mia Camian
    Age:10 by human year maybe 2 by fox
    Strenghts:She has a Jewel that gives her the use of Dark Magic.
    Weakness:She is 2 strong
    Description:black drezs with red strick. two tails ,and her hair is black with red strickes.
    seen in: my story
    Facts:She is a fox but adopted by bats and her sis. is Rouge.
    Bios:When her parents died bats took care of her. She met a bat named Coal and they BFFs and Coals sister Val the fox bat.
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    Post by t5in October 22nd 2010, 4:50 pm

    Ahh I might as well repost my characters description granted he has a longer and more detailed history but thats just his history in a nutshell

    Name: Arthur 'Hol' Hawktalon II

    Age: Viewing age of 24 (but over eight hundred years old)

    Species: Hedgehog

    Gender: Male

    Marital status: Single

    Birthplace: Kotorian palace

    Occupation: High king of the kotor realms

    Residence: Kotor realms (where within the Kotorian realms you are immortal but leaving the realms will cause you to age normally)

    Alignment: Good

    Known relatives: Mother - Alice (Deceased), Father - Arthur I (Deceased), Sister - Sarah (Alive)

    Abilities: Increased Strength, Increased Reflex's, Increased Balance, Increased Speed (around 500 MPH but with enough power rings just under 800 MPH), Increased Energy, Martial arts

    Weakness: Dark energy, Women (not a womaniser just a soft heart)

    Personality: Quirky, Humerous, Soft hearted (but when angry or sad becomes distant, quiet and cold), Slightly sadistic in nature.

    Weaponry: a red bladed sword called 'Blood fury' that can change form at a thought, when blood is applied to the blade the blood will begin to glow as the blood itself will become venomous as if poison was applied to the sword.

    Element: Light

    Favorite saying: Hail to the king baby

    History: His father having died in a great war his mother was pregnant at the time and shortly after the end of the war she gave birth to both Arthur and Sarah, Arthur being named after his father.
    Eight hundred years pass and the Kotorian realms are at peace, but when the gate reopens to earth a human incursion occurs and the Kotorian youths are taken from their homes back to earth, they were specifically targeted for Kotorians are naturally more durable and can take more punishment than usual with a special martial arts only taught within the Kotorian realms.
    His mother being murdered infront of his eyes caused Arthur to become cold and distant, attacking his captors whenever he got the chance, his sister having escaped from the clutches of the humans remained at the palace.
    On earth the Kotorian youths were taken to a secret location which belonged to a defence contractor known as Nyugen corp where they were given enhancements to their bodies and were trained for twelve years to become the perfect killing machines.
    Having been given the code name Hol for his increased ability to gather the light into his hands and fire it in beams, he eventually escaped after these twelve years, but he was quickly hunted down and killed by his fellow Kotorian kin, he was sent to the afterlife down below where he was given the power of a powerful demon known as an Avenger, he returned and destroyed the secret labs and training facilities for revenge.
    Now free of Nyugen corp Hol returned to his home world to rule as High king, at times leaving the Kotor realms to go on adventures with freinds he had made while travelling back to the Kotor realms.

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    Post by Shade October 27th 2010, 5:27 pm

    Full Name: Joseph Badrage
    Nicknames: Badrage... usually. Also Jbad
    Age:21
    Strengths: Melee battle, humour
    Description: black hair tied in ponytail, skinny
    Bios/Story: Started the Hellz Revenge long ago. Before then, was a part of the mighty guild Devil's Asylum. Made Captain Emp an officer in his Hellz Revenge guild, to which he remains this very day (provided they still exist).
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    Post by Cosmo The Seedrian October 31st 2010, 8:05 pm

    Full name: Rojo The Dog
    Age: 12
    Birthday: April 6th
    Powers: Can use any weather/ Disaster power (Hurricane,Fog,lightning etc)
    Description: Has no clothes, Is red, skinny, has Shoes
    Bio/Story: Rojo is one of seven siblings. He is the oldest his siblings names are Clover,Earth,Aqua,Teddy,Deanna,and Rex. Rojo's Father Frank went to work for Eggman so he can pay money for his seven kids. He told his wife August that he went to work for him. She said " Why Frank? Why? Frank answer was to pay for our seven kids of course. At the end Frank asked to hand over Rojo so he can give him to Eggman, Or Eggman would keep August's other children prisoner. So August made it foggy so Rojo and her could escape. After running August came to a town she knocked on a random door. A raccoon answered named Rocky. August asked if she could take care of Rojo for her. Rocky asks "Just what is this about"? August says "let me come in and explain it to you." So Rocky takes care of Rojo. When it was the day of Rojo's twelve-th birthday Rocky tells Rojo the story. So Rojo Goes out to find Eggmans base then he realized he didn't have a plane. So he went to Tails and told him the story that Rocky told him. Tails says "of course ill help you." So they end up saving Rojo's siblings. Then Clover told Rojo and the others that they all had some sort of weather power. Then she said that she over heard Eggman talking. So she made up the team name which is Team Weather. She also said that Rojo should be the leader because he had all of there powers. So thats Rojo's story.
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    Post by SonShadSilv003 November 1st 2010, 1:27 am

    Name: Terrador

    Race: Echidna

    Gender: Male

    Height: 3 feet 6 inches tall

    Weight: 115 pounds

    Age: 18

    IQ: 130

    Known relatives: Temblor (father) and Gaia (mother.) Both are deceased and
    were formidable geomancers

    Marital status: single

    DOB: 6-17-92

    Birthplace: Downtown Station Square

    Residence: Somewhere deep in the mountains

    Occupation: None

    Social Class: Loner

    Alignment: Neutral

    Top speed: 60 mph (on foot)

    Appearance: Typical echidna look with brown fur. However he has five-fingered hands rather than the mitten-shaped ones

    Quill style: Four brown dreadlocks on each side of his head, six on the back
    and four on the front, two on each side that covers the corners of his eyes.
    The bottom half of the quills are also a darker shade of brown and seem to be
    made out of rock itself.

    Eye color: Green

    Attire: He has no gloves or shoes, a loose-fitting tan vest and baggy dark
    brown, almost black jeans that have his tail poking out the back. He also has
    green colored markings on his palm, the back of his hand, also on the bottoms
    and tops of his feet (they are similar to Silver the hedgehog's.) These markings are the key to his Geokinesis

    Abilities - Geokinesis. Terrador can manipulate the destructive power of the
    earth, preferably anything ground based. Using his power, he can hurl large
    boulders at enemies or bombard them with hundreds or thousands of smaller ones
    or create colossal pillars. He can also create small tremors that stun any
    enemies within a ten yard radius. His signature attack is called Geo Spear.
    Raising an arm, he can form a spear shaped projectile out of his earth
    surroundings. In addition he can create a wall slightly taller than himself
    for protection against projectiles, although a very powerful projectile or
    many weaker ones will go right through the wall. Another attack he only uses
    as a sort of a way to turn the tide of battle if he knows he will be beaten is
    called Geo Blast. He covers his body with the earth around him then uses a
    majority of his strength to unleash it in all directions. The range of the
    attack varies on how much power he uses. He can also use the same method of
    covering his body with earth or only cover an arm or a leg, always leaving
    only his eyes uncovered, strengthening both his offense and defense until it
    wears down. With the aforementioned "geo armor" he focuses on manipulating the
    earth he wears, making him move slower or faster depending on what he covers
    himself in. He is also somewhat sluggish on his feet and can utilize the earth
    as transportation purposes or increase his speed varying on the type of
    terrain. His Geokinesisis isn't his only asset. He usually combines his power
    with his vast knowledge of martial arts matched with his acrobatic proficiency
    and his super strength. Terrador also has massive amounts of endurance and has
    to undergo a lot of damage to go down for the count. Terrador can also harness
    the power of the Chaos Emeralds. Each additional emerald in his possession
    doubles his power, maxing out at all seven where he can ultimately attain his
    super form. The only noteable difference in his power increase is he can move
    more earth using less energy.

    Weaknesses: Terrador is extremely hydrophobic and the water also hinders his
    abilities. His geo powers are also useless while in the air. Another weakness
    of his is a tendency to overexert himself. Unless he finishes an enemy quickly
    before doing so leaves him vulnerable.

    Personality: Terrador is stern like the element he controls and can also
    sometimes seems emotionless and non-caring, but the fact he wouldn't hesitate to lend a helping hand contridicts this. He also has trust issues from a
    result of his troubled past.

    Super Form – Fissure Terrador: With the power of all seven Chaos Emeralds
    Terrador can attain his super form. His appearance doesn't change other than a
    slight muscular increase and a bright outline emitting from him. His
    dreadlocks are somewhat longer and seem to float. Terrador gains flight and
    near invincibility.

    Background history: Terrador lived a normal life of a happy kid, living with
    his mother and father in their cozy house in downtown Station Square. This was
    until the age of six when he unleashed his dormant geomancing capabilities.
    His mother and father then made a mutual agreement to train their son, his
    father even teaching his vast knowledge of martial arts. They soon found their
    son was powerful, far exceeding their expectations. By the age of nine he
    surpassed his own parents. Things were going great for him until at the age of
    twelve while the family was asleep deep in the night Terrador awoke to his
    father telling him these group of assassins came to collect the bounty that
    was placed on them. He also told him they captured his mother and was
    attempting to use her as bait to lure him into a trap. A noise sounded, his
    father demanded that he get as far away as he can. Terrador fled with many
    unanswered questions, worried and terrified for his parents but knew this
    would be best for him. He ran and ran until he found himself alone deep in the
    mountain side. He thought the worst for his parents but they raised him strong
    and knew if anything bad happened they did it for him. Even if they did
    sacrifice themselves it would not be in vain. Terrador survived by making
    shelter out of the earth around him, using his Geokinesis to hunt for food and
    even found bodies of water. Six years has passed since he has seen his
    parents. Terrador has gone under self-training in hopes of avenging his fallen
    parents who he knows well enough are either dead or being held hostage.


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    Post by Shade November 1st 2010, 5:44 pm

    Full Name: Lolita Nomura
    Nicknames: Loli
    Age:18
    Strengths:humour, fashion
    Description: long blonde hair, slim build
    Bios/Story: Along with Love Repine, she manages Mojo Beach. It strives hard to be a popular beach providing entertainment, and Lolita and Love have successfully managed it for a long time. She was also the manager of the store SySy, which professionally designs fashionable clothes for women.
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    Post by The Prodigious Ult Zerda December 14th 2010, 12:15 am

    New characters? Hell yeah. Marvel at my new legion of

    Poetic Figurines. 2011 lineup

    Birth name: Arctarius Vortex-Garde Necromancer
    Age: Last recorded at the age of 72
    Hailed from~ As history tells, Arctarius hailed from a village known as Angst-Lion Cliff-side, Inverted World; Deamane'.
    Occupation: Arctarius takes pride in several occupations. As Lord of Poetry, he writes angst and romantic poems and as a Wraith of Insanity, as a painter with depicted nightmares.
    Nick Names: Lord of Poetry, Wraith of Insanity, #4, Incognito Poet, Vortex, Arc, Thy Poet
    Music: Arctarius is a metal oriented male and prefers 'intellectual' metal. ' No one by my Side ' by mirrorthrone is such example.
    Personality~
    Arctarius is as well similar to Dante', and as well has the same traits as Azerth. He is, however, more troubled and tragically focused than the other two. Arctarius takes his time with total intelligence rather means of violence or studies. As partial demon, Arctarius has lived many years and has gathered many insight for his inverted world. Arctarius seldom talks and seldom orders people. Arctarius has been always quiet, and only talks if need to. His voice differs every time someone hears him.
    Official Theme: Dying God coming into Human flesh by Celtic Frost

    Personal Identity, Origins, and Tragedy

    Born alone, Arctarius lived in a village full of shadowy poets who wrote and wrote to their sire of the lands at the time. Looked over by a malicious black lake, Arctarius grew among the poets and adapted to their dark and mysterious ways. He began writing epic poems with at least 10 cantos at the age of Seven. Arctarius never experienced a love life and he claims he will never. Arctarius befriended an inventor named Lenore, who later became his life long friend. Lenore, like Arctarius, was born amongst the shadow poets. Rather to write he decided to create, and thus, exiled from the village. Arctarius followed. after leaving one of the most angst poems ever to be read, called ' Exiled in the ****** Realms, " a 18 canto epic poem.
    Lenore had an idea to create a wall surrounding the ruined castle of Kerzeshan, the former siege of the Dragon Queen, and take control over it to make new types of poetry- romance, ideology, philosophical, and imagery. Lenore built the wall fairly quick, and what Arctarius later found that it was a trick to absorb all the positivity in the inverted world into sadness. The more is swallowed, the larger the walls expanded. To be sure he origins weren't destroyed by the rampaging Wall of Negativo, Arctarius threw his mighty angst poem into the Black Lake- which later caused the waves to swish into a circle, and as more angst poets of his village tossed, the larger the circle. Soon after, the Black Lake was later changed into the Poetic sea, and in the heart of it lied the Maelstrom of Poetry. With this, Arctarius' village would be saved, since the Maelstrom had much more negative energy the Wall could ever have. However, Thy Devil, the new Devil of Arctarius' world, King of the lands, knew about this and ordered his demonic legion to purge the village. Though few were saved, many were slaughtered. Arctarius hid with a near handful of refugees. The maelstrom however was powerful enough to lift their spirits. As the Wall curved around the ruin village, Arctarius used the teachings he learned from Lenore, to build a retreat known as " Quanidans' Retreat, " based from a character he written about in his epic poem, ' Reading and Singing and Retreating. "
    Lenore grew weary of the grown village. Lenore, serving under Thy Devil, ordered his guards to finish the job. Arctarius' people, however, stood against them. After a year of conflict and war, it was finished when Arctarius' exodus to the other side of the lake, blew in black flames, and fell into the heart of the sea, into the Maelstrom. The ship was torn apart and the Maelstrom couldn't hold that much negativity in it, and so it was evaporated. The ship was annihilated, however, Arctarius still survived. The last of his people, the last of his race, and the last of his poetic figure, Arctarius swam to the other side to another great positivity city known as ' Leruotos divinity. ' There, Arctarius was recognized by a council of poets, known as Wraiths, Arctarius became the fourth wraith, and dubbed " Wraith of Insanity. "
    Now, he awaits the vengeance of Lenore. Lenore once told him the fabled tale of the Wraith King, and it's awesome power. Now, he must find the Wraith King's Crown, and wear it, to smite down the negative world.

    Mental and Physical properties

    Phobias: Pyro-phobic.
    Diseases: Constant lower-back pains

    Obsessed with Reading and Exploration of the Wraith King
    His face, voice, eyes, and body figure changes rapidly, giving him the name Incognito Poet.

    ~ Today Story ~

    " With the Maelstrom of Poetry gone, I felt weak- to this day I still feel weak. But yet, I now heard of a mortal casting necromancy powers? As powerful as I? Bah! No mortal can have the powers of a demon, no one! Not from my people! "

    The news spread around and poets began to write perpetually about the story of the Harbinger of Death. Arctarius was interested- and yet never heard such a thing. Arctarius however, heard of a young poet named Dante' Di'blo. He is very interested in his works, and interested on how he supplied the powers of Necromancy. Arctarius watches him for the Magi City of ' Arcane' diem' Requiem, ' and observes the studies of him. Azerth, the created painting and poem come alive, was a major interest in Arctarius and plans on finding him.

    Like Dante', Arctarius is obsessed on insight, yet, Arctarius wants to claim the Dragon for himself, and take him for studies. Dante' wants him killed. Arctarius did find him in the mountains, angered and coiled. Arctarius slowly observed the beast and smiled. After years of finding, Arctarius has ordered Azerth to attack Dante' once more. With Azerth unmaking the world of Victoria, Dante' still lied in secrecy under the caverns of the Laments. Known as " Pyre Retreat, " Dante' lead a bunch of intelligent poets to assault Azerth. Upon battle, Azerth quickly shun them- all except Dante'. Arctarius wanted him to suffer for having the powers of a demon.

    Arctarius now rebuild's Azerth's wounds, and lends him few prophets of his own known as Phenomenons of Black Fire, of which mortals who were once interest in Dante', are now into Azerth. Arctarius will ready Azerth for the final cataclysm, and meanwhile, will search for the Wraith King's crown, to become invincible.

    The tragic survivor, and soon, the Wraith King.
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    Post by Bowie December 31st 2010, 5:40 pm

    Might as well contribute one thing not related to the conflict at hand.. as I try to not be a total "Donkey" since I am a nice guy.

    Name: Saffron
    Nickname(s): Saff
    Age: 18
    Sex: M
    Species: Hedgehog
    Alignment: Neutral (loosely based Byronic Hero)
    Appearance:

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    Original Header
    More Realistic
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    Theme Song:
    I Will Not Bow - Breaking Benjamin

    Supporting Soundtrack:
    The Earth Will Shake - Thrice *Early Life/ Containment*
    Chemical Blood - Fightstar *Testing Outcome*
    Embrace The Curse - I Hate Kate
    One of a Kind - Breaking Point
    Adrenaline (Tweaker Remix) - Gavin Rossdale
    Seasons - The Veer Union
    Wake Me Up - Zebrahead
    (Can You) Trip Like I Do - Filter / The Crystal Method
    Burn in My Light - Mercy Drive
    *Super Theme*

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    Personality: He has a typically calm personality, not exactly happy but not to the point where he would get the "emo" label. Usually serious and well thinking but has a tendency to be a hothead in some situations. If a character tends to get to know him he can have a brighter personality that he keeps shelled in that has a slightly comical side to it. And lastly fighting can bring out more of his character as it tends to bring out at least some dark/mild cockiness.

    Family: N/A The "test subjects" for the cults experiments were mostly orphans with no or little emotional ties to anything. This is to say, he may have a family out there but he doesn't know and it is mostly irrelevant.

    Transport:N/A

    Weapons: N/A


    Biography: One end result of a series of tests run by a secretive cult, but was naturally born, Saffron was one of the final outcomes to be deemed an outliar, or unfit not because of him not gaining benefits, but because of the physical changes to his looks that the tests had caused. The program was set up to naturally develop stronger, faster beings. The end result of which was disastrous (as only 3 came out being deemed "perfect.") The tests happened 6 years ago and they affected Saffron in both positive and negative ways, positively he is stronger and faster than he would have ever been naturally (a good balance of power and speed leaning a bit to the power side) and they gained him some raw energy powers.. negatively it changed the color of his natural skin tone and all of the tribal markings on his head and quills remain permanent as well as a change in his eye color. The tests left him with impaired vision during the day, leaving him as mostly a nocturnal dweller. and his looks scared many of the normal citizens (since admittedly he does look like a bad guy), this led to him shelling out most of the outside world and disliking most individuals. He spends most of his free time training his energy powers in case they are ever needed.


    Moves/Combat Style: He's primarily a brawler and loves to be in the face of whoever he does get into a fight with. Depending on who he's fighting he may react different ways. If it's against someone he doesn't know or just for fun he usually has a more patient style of fighting and refrains from using his energy based attacks, preferring to be close for a good spar. However if the person is someone he hates/dislikes or someone he deems to be a sizable threat he can flare a temper and go in with a hot headed brawling ego, here he wont hold back energy wrapped punches and kicks e.t.c. or a ranged offensive. Can be prone to silly mistakes if flustered but usually starts with a more distant "your move" sort of approach.

    Energy Melee- Not affecting the speed or range of his attacks, if he feels like extra power needs to be packed into attacks he transfers energy to his limbs, wrapping his hands and feet in a bright purple aura to deliver stronger impacts. The downside is that holding up a fight with this perk for too long severely drains his stamina so it is better used in shorter bursts.

    Finger Bang- I guess it's like something ripped right out of Yu-Yu-Hakusho. It is simply a larger amount of concentrated energy sent into one or both of his hands pointer fingers, which he has pointed like guns. The blast can vary depending on how much energy he allocates varying from some weaker minor shots to one gigantic blast that would drain all his stamina and energy in one go. The downside is that excessive use is also harmful to him, noting that burning up all of his energy.. especially in larger blasts, completely exhausts him which makes him horribly prone to weakness or fainting after excessive use.

    Skills:
    Not much experience for the skills category. ^^;
    N/A bad unskilled character. BAD. >C

    Strengths:
    Awareness- Great night vision and hearing help him pinpoint things/people and makes it more difficult to sneak up on him. During the day the advantage is not so great due to the weakened eyesight.

    General Physical Attributes- He is very bendable with faster than average reflexes for movement and has an impressive high jump that isn't good enough to match flying or gliding but can still cover good air and ground with slower than running speed.

    Balance- A basic 55/45 split between speed and power makes Saffron a solid foe for most as he can outrun essentially half of the population, and out muscle a little more than the other half. He wont dominate in the strength or speed category, but the overall balance paired with the ability to high jump make him a danger to others whether they are fast (because he will usually overpower), strong (usually faster), or flying (because he can still nab them, so the air isn't guaranteed safe)


    Weaknesses:
    Night Walker- Being primarily nocturnal, he is not as effective during day fights or fights in highly illuminated areas. These areas/times are when he is the most vulnerable.

    Balance- As big a strength as balance is, it can also come back to haunt him, as mistakes can lead to opponents speed getting the better of him or end up in him getting overpowered by stronger foes.

    Maybe Rechargeable.. but not Energizer- Like the fancy name. x3
    Relying on energy to amp up his attacks and fuel the finger bang, let alone deletable energy that hinders his ability to preform is highly inefficient. As described above, excessive use of his energy based attacks will exhaust him severely. The energy/stamina can still "recharge" if ever emptied but the process takes longer the more he used initially. This meaning.. if he ever depletes all of his energy in a fight, it would take almost twice as long to get back to 100% compared to him using half in one fight. These periods of energy regain are also openings to attack him while he's not at full strength over long periods.

    P.S. Yes.. I know what "Finger Bang" means. xD

    Extra Notes

    >He has a typically calm personality, not exactly happy but not to the point where he would get the "emo" label.
    depressed or unhappy is not emo. i know you're saying he isn't emo, but that information is really not needed because anyone with an IQ of 7 or more should know emo =/= unhappy.

    1- Typically people associate a character that is written as "chronically depressed" as "emo" is that a proper correlation.. no, but I felt the need to clarify.




    >Usually serious and well thinking but has a tendency to be a hothead in some situations.
    in some situations everyone has a tendency to be a hothead. if he has a temper then it should be noted that way.

    2- Temper is a good word for it, but I wanted to describe, in as simple a way as possible, that he isn't always one or the other and is fairly easy to fluster given the situation, I find that much better than certain characters which are always angry or always calm, I don't find either extreme very realistic as a constant.




    >negatively it changed the color of his natural skin tone and all of the tribal markings on his head and quills remain permanent as well as a change in his eye color
    that's not really a negative. a negative would have been like giving him a disease or something.

    3- Those are mostly physical negatives.. I try to set the sort of world I picture him in as slightly different from the general world, a little darker, but I guess more "natural" in some sense if you could call it that.. the change of color and the markings would be seen as out of place and it would make it hard for one to fit in with the general population, the word "freak" could be applied I suppose, but not on a Hulk sort of level... I suppose you could call it a social disadvantage.



    >The tests left him with impaired vision during the day, leaving him as mostly a nocturnal dweller.
    while this is a legitimate downside, it sounds like an excuse to make him nocturnal, to me. whether it is or isn't is not the issue here.

    4- There are two reasons that I chose to make him nocturnal, one would be that he was stuck in a prison-style underground laboratory for said cult for most of his life up to this point along with other "lab rats" he didn't get much sunlight and the cells in question were not lit, therefore he grew up having to adapt to a low-light setting. The final step in the tests and trials run by the cult resulted in an amplification of attributes while also filling subjects with the unstable energy... however the formula was far from perfect.. so his negative attribute of not being able to adjust to daylight was actually amplified.. I'm not saying he can't see during the day, but it's so bright that most everything would come out as a blur, and he would have to identify others by voice for the most part.



    >He's primarily a brawler
    that's fine, i know plenty of people like that, but none of them can really be described as "calm" most of the time. people that like to fight are usually cocky and boisterous. they are not necessarily stupid, though, so there's nothing wrong with those personality traits.

    5- I think the way I think of a Brawler is slightly different than most... I consider a hand to hand fighter without any real form of honed skill (martial arts training e.t.c.) to be a Brawler.. he's not a swordman, nor a gunner.. he relies mostly on a short ranged arsenal of attacks be them energy (he doesn't have any sort of ultimate Kamehameha bs.. the energy isn't strong enough to be effective at range unless it is highly concentrated, which takes a large toll on him, so mostly the power serves as a melee supplement) or straight punches and kicks. It's all unrefined instincts, natural ability, unnatural ability, and physical contact... I don't see a Brawler as.. a drunken Irish Boxer per say..



    >However if the person is someone he hates/dislikes or someone he deems to be a sizable threat he can flare a temper and go in with a hot headed brawling ego
    and thus his mind should become clouded by his anger

    6- It does, and he makes mistakes, big ones, especially when dealing with his old tormentors. Truth be told, up till now the true hate list of his is a very exclusive one, he hasn't been around long enough to hate much more than the ones who imprisoned him and those around him and either left them for dead or turned them into weapons.





    the one thing i never understood about people that create brawling characters is use of "energy" in an RPG-ish sense; real life isn't an RPG, and the character would benefit from more skilled roleplay if that mechanic didn't exist [even if you don't roleplay with this character]. even in media that uses this "energy" element to it, like dragon ball, it isn't a static number and they rarely talk about what percentage of power they're at. it's like everyone on the planet took freeza's "i'm at 100%" quotation and mutilated the hell out of it.

    *
    I know I went into brief detail about the whole "energy is unstable and while he has it, he can't really use it all up" thing, but what I did was temper it, so it's not like he can just constantly keep someone at bay with the power, he would literally die or pass out if he just burned huge chunks of it up, which is why that main "spirit gun inspired" attack is a real last resort, especially when it is used in a particularly draining manner. That unrefined power is what keeps him alive, so while he can use it as a weapon for his advantage, it also handicaps him, he has to walk a fine line with it or risk being gassed and beaten in a short while.




    appearance wise he looks pretty appealing though, it may be because i really like that combination of colours on a design, and he's drawn in a sonic-enough style so that isn't really a problem. his name almost got me there, since people associate saffron with yellow, and i laughed upon realization that the name was more fitting than i first assumed. it... is rather feminine, though, being the name of a flower, and since he doesn't look all that masculine to begin with... i almost thought he was a girl when i first saw him. just a little something you should keep note of.
    * Never been too into making something look overly brutish and masculine, not to say I'm trying to create a sissy either, but what I've noticed is that in popular media, the more of a brute you are, the more easily you get tossed aside... whether it be Tom Cruise beating up some muscular version of Billy Bean Boxer or in almost any anime where the big muscular guy gets beat up by that mysterious.. anti-tank of a figure. It's something that I'm well aware of and am fine with, though I agree that the main picture looks a little more feminine than some of the other pictures that have been made by me or others of him, but the general design is the same and the artist who did the above picture, Chibi-Metal, was one of my original inspirations as an artist in this specific genre, so I'm particularly fond of it. =P





    the biggest problem is that it's a hedgehog. easy to design, yes, appealing to the eye, often, but that just kills the originality.
    * I also don't think that the species of a character should bring down its overall creative rating.. I've seen people call certain characters Tenreks but the only difference is what they call the character, the image created is no different than what a hedgehog would be. I agree that the Hedgehog fan character community is quite populated, but I believe that with the right direction, anyone can make a character of any species and mold it into something really good. Just takes time and dedication to actually mold said characters as successfully as possible.
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    If any of you have a recolor as your character I give you this:

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